Rocked by the moments of departure --
we the missed the plane,
baby left and flew faraway,
the ending far from serene.
There was no last minute rush to the Airport,
we missed the train.
Two souls world's apart,
two different echos in different lives,
mistakes and riddles drove our every
whim.
A dive into sulphiric acid,
burning our flesh year by year
we let go the reason within it all,
scorched to bones and dancing
with dead.
Cadavers soaked in blood,
remembering what could have been,
nostalgia of lives we no longer live,
heart like frames over our eyes,
a hole in our chest, lights dancing
provactively.
Secret Gardens and empty dreams,
it all came to slave labour,
forcing up mirrors, reflecting
thousands upon thousands of empty
souls.
Up they went, and in that
day Rome was built.
Through that hall full of the visages we bear,
through the darkness of inner turmoil, broken
words, shattered kisses, naked bodies twisted
and malformed in the funhouse.
A clown, a jester I am, to entertain is my mission,
I'm to give you hell, give you heaven.
Angels singing a swan song,
as a brick falls to the ground,
a touch sends a shiver down my
spine.
This siege on my heart is bliss,
as they all come tumbling down--
down the stairs to the end.
Bring down the wall baby,
it's smashed beyond repair,
your kiss, your smile
has destroyed my shadow,
see the corpse of my fear
right here.
The emotions in this piece are raw and powerful, subtley weaved among the words. It brought along a large range of feelings, leaving me empty in the end, an interesting feeling. Your word choices were great and the flow was consistently smooth. Your concept wasn't very original, but the way you presented it was. A refreshingly good work all in all. To this I shall extend a *like*. 
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