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Mon May 19, 2008 12:10 pm
cookie_pirate says...



Hello.
Chelsi is the name.
I'm from the Philippines and I'm very happy that my friend invited me here.
I wish to improve on my writing skills so I hope that I'll have a great time in here. :]

So... friends? :)
  





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Mon May 19, 2008 1:14 pm
Demeter says...



Hey Chelsi

You've come to the right place if you want to improve your skills! What do you like to write? Btw, remember to post at least two reviews before your own work :) Other helpful things you can find at FAQ and Rules & Guides.

I can be your friend if you like :) PM me if you need anything or just want to talk!

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Mon May 19, 2008 1:40 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



Demeter remember no Btws. No chat speak.

Chelsi,
Who's your friend? I am a very curios person... :lol: But any way, Hope you have a great time here. Pm any of us and I'm sure we'll answer. See ya around
-em
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“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
  





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Mon May 19, 2008 1:59 pm
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Hi Chelsi, I'm new too and within 3 days, I found this place warm and wonderful! Have a good time here!
Currently amusing myself by watching the cumulation of bugs in the computer. Now where did they come from?
  





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Mon May 19, 2008 2:16 pm
Summerless says...



Hi Chelsi! Welcome to Young Writers Society! Looks like Demeter basically told you about the reviews. Let me extend on them. Reviewing is when you critique/compliment someone else's work. The critique must be constructive--they must help the poet in a beneficial way--and you cannot be vague. No "I like your work. It's pretty." The better your review is (it will probably be longer) the more points you earn.

To post your own work you have to spend 150 points. So make sure you give at least two reviews for each entry you submit.

Questions? Feel free to Pm me. I find Young Writers Society to be my favorite online place. Everyone is friendly and we all work together to improve our writing.

Hope this helps and once again, welcome to YWS!
Summerless
  





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Mon May 19, 2008 2:30 pm
melkor says...



Welcoem to you new person!

May I have a cookie?


Not a pirate one though, they tend to have worms, just a normal one if you please.


:P

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Mon May 19, 2008 2:31 pm
cookie_pirate says...



@ Demeter
I write mostly on the category of "romantic fictions" and somehow, I also write poems. xD
Thank you so much. :)

@ Em
Oh, her name is Chinnie and if I'm not mistaken her username is silently loud or something like that.
See you around too. :)

@ Lorraine
I sure will. :)

@ Summerless
Oh, now I seem to understand it better.
Some of the forums I've joined won't critique in a way I want them to so I'm really looking forward to it. :)

@ Melkor
Lol. xD
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Mon May 19, 2008 2:56 pm
melkor says...



Romantic?


Oh noez!


I'll read some/review it if you like.

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Mon May 19, 2008 3:04 pm
cookie_pirate says...



Well yeah.
Thanks I'll try to post it soon. :)
"And so the Lion fell in love with the lamb."
Edward Cullens + Bella Swan

Twilight Madness.
  





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Mon May 19, 2008 3:07 pm
melkor says...



Oh goodie. :wink:
Isn't it funny how guys will only enjoy a love story from a males point of view, while girls can stick both?

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Mon May 19, 2008 3:13 pm
cookie_pirate says...



Lol.
Yeah, well do you enjoy it only when it's on a male's point of view?
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Mon May 19, 2008 3:17 pm
melkor says...



I assume so, unless I'm really woman... :shock:

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Mon May 19, 2008 3:20 pm
cookie_pirate says...



Lol. Well, I'd be shock to discover of you will be. xD
But of course, that would be impossible.

I'll try making a story on your point of view. :)
"And so the Lion fell in love with the lamb."
Edward Cullens + Bella Swan

Twilight Madness.
  





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Mon May 19, 2008 3:21 pm
melkor says...



Make sure it's psychotic and very mean.


:wink:

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Mon May 19, 2008 3:29 pm
cookie_pirate says...



May I know why you want it to be like that? xD
"And so the Lion fell in love with the lamb."
Edward Cullens + Bella Swan

Twilight Madness.
  








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