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I will review any poem that I am asked to...

I do my comments in colors so it is easy to understand.
Red- Grammer mistakes
Blue- Things I think you should change to make the poem better, in my opinion, or from my expereance.
Pink/purple- Things I really like
Green- Aditional comments

When I review a poem normally I will tell you if I liked it or not, what I liked and didn't like about it, why I liked or didn't like that, and what I think you could do to make it better. I can be kinda harsh, but I will always tell you why and how to improve.

Ok, this is one of the reveiws I've done if you want to see...
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I will only review poems so don't ask me to review a story or a book, okay?

Thank you, :smt003
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~Rain~
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Anyone!?!?!?! :?:
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Hi! I was wondering if you could review my first attempt at poetry?

it began with a lump in the throat

Thanks in advance!

~Sporks
Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks in advance!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

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Could you please review my poem? Diary

A thousand thanks,

A. S.




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Will you review my poem for me? topic68412.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Can you please review this? Thanks! topic68836.html#p757343
There is so much said in the silence. But writing, for me, became a way of fighting the repression, of protecting no one, of saying everything. I began to write to save my own life.




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Thanks for the requests!! Who's next?? :smt003
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Bump! :smt003
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Would you reveiw my poem please, and like if it's any good?




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Ok, whos next!?!?
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Anyone out there?!?!
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Anyone out there??!?!?!?!??!?! :?:
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Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

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Done!! Anyone else???
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Once you replace negative thoughts with positive ones, you'll start having positive results.
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