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King Maxxwell knelt down to the grubby stone floor, his dead guards laid lifelessly behind him, and desperately begged Gail to spare his life. Gail was much taller and more muscular than Maxxwell. He had jet black hair, and wore chrome chain mail armor which was unusual for a warlock. You could barely see his odd attire because of the chest height mist throughout the chamber. The chamber, in the shape of an pyramid, was covered in black stones. It was ancient and the stones seemed to be rusting away and engulfed in dust.
Gail glared Maxxwell in his terror-stricken eyes and said, "I have no mercy for a worthless life like yours."
The cruel warlock began to recite Greek incantations. He pointed his battle-scarred hand at the brave heart of the king, concentrating vile energy in his palm. Gail discharged the dark energy into the heart of the king. Maxxwell was thrown toward the dusty brick wall of the faint and dusk chamber. He was dead instantly and Teslarhi emitted a villainous chuckle.
"I pity you, old fool," Teslarhi started. "your travels here in hopes of gaining my power before me are all in vain!" His laughter got louder with each chuckle.
He had brutally slain the noble king; the nation was now under his control. He gazed at his left arm to admire the power of the Gauntlet of Passilia. The name was of no importance to him. The Gauntlet was said to be the most barbarous weapon of mankind, which was the reason he traveled to this holy chamber.
The impact from Maxxwell's body and the warlock's energy had deteriorated a vital piece in the chamber's structure and flocks of debris fell from overhead. Gail acknowledged that the chamber was falling apart and he darted to the nearest exit. Whenever he spotted a ray of the sun's elegant glare he dashed for it. He finally reached the exit and jumped off of a steep cliff. He had better chances surviving the deadly fall than being easily suppressed by tons of ancient bricks. Gail's vision was blurred by the tense winds but, he could still see a luminous glow coming from the gauntlet. He suddenly halted and levitated. He sighed in great relief.
"Now, I shall inform my army and villagers of my reign.” The Gauntlet understood his words and started to pull him by the arm.
Gail eventually gained control and learned how to fly for himself.
He flew among the clouds and sun. He was anxious to start his reign over his nation and the rest of the land--this was the longest ride of his immortal life. Gail gained his immortality by ending the life of the God of the Underworld. Now Teslarhi had the service of the mightiest soldiers of the Underworld. He destroyed the keeper of the Underworld before he gained the power of the gauntlet. Since that took place the only one brave enough to stand in his way to power was King Maxxwell. He firmly believed that if he gained more power he would be able to dispose of the whole land. That is exactly what Gail is planning to do--dominate the Land.
Gail arrived at his newly acquired empire. Gail landed on the towering balcony which used to belong to King Maxxwell. He opened the glass doors and took a first step on the beautiful marvel floor of the throne room. He jaunted toward the throne and sat down. He then delicately picked up the crown which sat on a cushioned stool by the throne and placed it upon his head of black hair; he was now a king. Gail said "He was never worthy of having such luxuries."
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