Black Water
I tangle myself in the net of life
while trying not to drown in its waters.
I tread waves weakly, tied down by anchors
made of memories: forgotten, or not.
I neither sink, nor swim, in black water.
Will a gracious hand try to pluck me out
of death’s sea, only to find I have stopped
breathing too soon? Why didn’t you see me
drifting out? The current took my body
away. I now float upon my torture.
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I'm not sure what I think of it. I hope it expresses well, and that the continuous metaphor wasn't too overused. All comments appreciated.
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