Kay's Reviews

Post links for critiques and I'll get to it within the week!

I mainly review poetry and fantasy/sci-fi chapters. If you have me start at the first chapter of your novel you can PM me when you add more chapters and I'll review them, too.

No payment wanted, at least for now:) Just remember me when I decide to post works, okay:)

Looks like I get to be the 1st. ☺

It's a comedy/fantasy story. It's kind of designed for the young and immature male demographic, but I'm hoping everyone will like it.

I am having trouble with tenses. I switch it midway through the dialogue (accidentally). If you can, let me know if it looks better in present or past tense.

Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)

Thanks. ☺

There you go.

Thank you! ☺