Poetry Train contest!

Best entry wins: one gift trophy thing from me, ONE THOUSAND POINTS, and I will shower you with reviews! Each person who enters will get a review from me free of charge.

How to win: Show an ability to take a common emotion and make it original and fun to read.

Contest ends in one month!

How to enter: This is a poem that never ends, just keep tacking on below in the comments.

First line:

I have many emotions.

Like the clouds, I cry.



Are we supposed to just enter a comment of what we think will be the next line?

I also have after that:

My body, commotions,
Like the birds, I fly.


I don't know, this contest is pretty cool, so I hope I win!

You keep going until your finished. There are zero length requirements but I would think submissions would be at least one stanza long. You can submit again if you please, as many times as you wish!

I have many emotions,
Like the clouds I cry.
My body, commotions,
Like the birds, I fly.

Tears cover my body,
Just like sheets,
Making me somebody,
Where comfort meets.

I spread my untold wings,
And glide away,
My body, it sings,
I am feeling okay.

I have many emotions,
Like a bull, I fight,
Full of explosions,
I am quite the sight.

I bloom like flowers,
And like petals, I’m soft.
I have many powers,
Hidden in an undercroft.

I have many emotions,
Like thunder, I roar.
Booming in agitation,
In an absolute uproar.

I have many emotions…

I know, this was very poorly written, but I may as well try and achieve something XD

Wow,this is so attractive -1000pts?! I must join this contest for sure

[quote="Lee0z"]I have many emotions,
Like the clouds I cry.
My body, commotions,
Like the birds, I fly.

Tears cover my body,
Just like sheets,
Making me somebody,
Where comfort meets.

I spread my untold wings,
And glide away,
My body, it sings,
I am feeling okay.

I have many emotions,
Like a bull, I fight,
Full of explosions,
I am quite the sight.

I bloom like flowers,
And like petals, I’m soft.
I have many powers,
Hidden in an undercroft.

I have many emotions,
Like thunder, I roar.
Booming in agitation,
In an absolute uproar.

Storms of passion
Fill up my heart
Slowly, painfully
Tear me apart

Emotion, emotion
Like never before
Hurting for others
It can't be ignored

Powerful, incredible
Growing every day
Like a monster within
Life, slowly fading away

Fighting a battle
Against a raging sea
Hopeless, pointless
Fighting me

Not that great, I know. But hey, I tried!

No need to copy the previous post, just add on with your comment ;p

Thanks for entering!

I have many emotions
that struggling in my mind
who want to fight their own mind,
appeal to conscience.

I saw children running and screaming
trying to hide behind their mothers,
their fathers dead at their side
with eyes wide open, looking straight at me.

"These young helpless,
same as flesh-eating caterpillars.
Do not let them grow and reproduce,
because they are a breed of rebels. "

I have many emotions
who shouted in my head,
it gripped my chest
when I fired shots at them.

The emotions tide inside me
how much I should have realized,
that they may become a butterfly
when they grows up.

p/s:I tried my best here

Hey Monster! Can you add onto the poem twice? Is there a limit?? Thanks for the great opportunity!

no limit! Post freely