Bring Me Your Sacrifices

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Hey, I'm back! Please review Chapter 12.1: Aleveri! Thanks. :D
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Oh, right, I forgot all about this thread. Well, I guess I'll go read that!




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Title:Exit Monologue (for a situationship)
Genre:Narrative, dramating
Content Rating: 18+ for language
Link: Exit monologue (for a situationship)
Specific concerns? Not really. Mostly about the general feeling this story gives, about how clear it is what the characters want and who they are, whether or not it is dramatic enough. :-)




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