I''ll review your action.

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It's quite simple, really. I'll review anything that has action in it, no matter the genre. I'll focus on the piece as a whole, naturally, but more in-depth when it comes to action.

Action is very broad, though. What kind of action? Most kinds, really. Preferably involving swords or knives. I'm not too knowledgeable when it comes to ranged fighting. Swords and knives is also very broad, good point. Well, I'm well-versed in most eras. I've read treatises by 15th century Italian masters and Viking age germanic masters, so yeah. You're in (somewhat) good hands.

While reviewing action, I will consider both the technical aspect and the emotional aspect. So, if you feel that you've written a bit of action, but would like an opinion about it, I'm the guy to go to ;)

Cheers.


Edit: this also applies to action in SBs. Naturally, this will take place in PM.
vulgus vult decipi, ergo decipiatur





Don't aim at success--the more you aim at it and make it a target, the more you are going to miss it. For success, like happiness, cannot be pursued; it must ensue, and it only does so as the unintended side-effect of one's dedication to a cause greater than oneself or as the by-product of one's surrender to a person other than oneself.
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