Reconstruction workshop

I welcome you to my little topic! Now that you are here, hear out what you can find here. If you're looking for a review that would focus on the impression of your work and every detail that might be wrong or good, except for some grammar mistakes, which I might not see, I'll gladly help you out with one and I won't ask for anything in return. Many people shamefully have had no reviews for a long time, some want more opinions, for both, as long as they do request, I'll help within my capabilities, but I'd also like to inform you, that I spend a substantial time writing my reviews in order to be of any good help, and thus you might have to wait a bit. I can review any work of writing and drawings, I would, however, deny to review a fan-fiction work, because I prefer originals to stay as they are in my memory.

Examples : 1) Harnesse - Episode 1 "Warning Signals" by Wariofart

Thanks for your time,
~Jeff

Would you be willing to review a screenplay? I mean, it's too short and I definitely need more character development, so maybe I'd want to revise it first to at least amp up the character development...but if I do that and post it on YWS, would you be willing to read it?

Gladly, let me know when you post it and I'll take a look at it, let's make it good

If you're still reviewing, can you review the first part of the pilot episode for a fantasy TV show I'm trying to write?

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Thanks!

Done~