Pigeon cannot writ poam.

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NaPoWriMo is not a thing that Pigeon does but it is a thing that Pigeon is doing.
I blame Kit. And PenguinAttack.

Sorry for the terrible poetry which is sure to ensue.
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Okay, first day.
I wrote a poem about how I am too tired to write a poem.


You Understand

I cannot do it now;
I am tired.
I cannot -
I’ll have to owe you.
I may be tired all week.
I’m sorry;
I’ll have to owe you.
You understand.
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This poem is not late. Not at all. Shh.
Also it is maybe worse than yesterday's if that is possible but I'm tired shhhh.


Acne Scars

When pressed to I
lay out the make-up things
(all gifts)
accumulated over
years of little use.

My skin is pockmarked like my brother’s,
I tell the foundation as it hides the acne scars,
the dented cheek, too.

I have lashes like a boy’s,
The mascara shakes it’s head;
drips on my shirt.

My lips are always too red,
I try, but the lipstick widens them out,
full and bright.

Look at you, they say,
you’re a girl, a girl, a girl.
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woo poam
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Ha. Ha. I wrote another poem about being tired. And it's also another angry poem about my mother. Who is surprised. No one is surprised. A day may come when I will write something that is not about being pissed off at my mum, but today is not that day. Sorry that this one is particularly crap. They are only getting worse.


You

Everything seeps
down
from
my head,
limbs, torso;
through my feet
into the carpet,
until I am so weary that
even
breathing
is a labour.

I break easy.
You break me
so
easily.



Or, alternatively:

MOTHER used absorb.
It’s super effective!
PIGEON had their energy drained!
PIGEON used passive aggression…
but nothing happened.
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write more about your mom making you angry!
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
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Yo, the 2nd one is so glorious. It's actually very vivid, effective imagery here and I love how you concluded it. So much!

And the 3rd actually made me laugh only because I relate so well. I'm thinking "worse" actually means "better"

I'ma look forward to reading your stuff too over the course of this month C: Srsly. You have such a witticism about your work that is refreshing.




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eeeeeeeee, you people are nice!

Here, as a reward have a poem about trains. I call it 'Trains', because I am super creative like that.


Trains

Old trains are for rainy days.
On rainy days I
fold into the lumpy seats,
warm,
watching out my window
as droplets
collect on the glass.

In Summer
the heat of so many bodies
builds over a day
until the seats melt
to my skin and
my clothes soak through with sweat.

Today it rained
and the rush of the water
melded with
the clamour of the rails.
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dafkjhdgjasklfj love it
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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My sister is getting married tomorrow and if you doubt that I am the worst bridesmaid ever then I am about to prove you wrong.
I'll just say, for those of you who know the people involved, this is not really an accurate depiction of how I feel, I'm just sick of the preparations, and the poem got away from me.


A Wedding Card

Congratulations, on this, your special day.
I look forward to watching you
both descend
further into mediocrity.

Congratulations,
on following the plan laid down
so long ago we’ve all
forgotten why.

Congratulations, something old,
something new, borrowed, blue,
just as you were told to do.
You changed your name,
you merged your funds (debts) and
you already ridicule each other publicly.

Congratulations, the fun part’s next.
I hope to god that someone
has explained it to you.
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loooooooove it.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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Here have a late poem for yesterday. I shall endeavour to write another one today so that I've got the right number.

Hours

Slipping out of the room, I
shut the door with a click which
resonates
too loud
through the sleepy house.

Tiptoeing past, I
am stopped by a voice
from a mattress on the floor.

“Where have you been?
I haven’t seen you for hours.”

Hours.

Silently, I grin,
and tiptoe on.
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Okay, so, while I haven't been posting anything here, I have been writing poetry. It's just all been for an assessment, and I'm nervous about putting it online before the assessment is marked in case their plagiarism checker gets confused. Poems here will resume, soon(ish).
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Okay, daily poetry shall now resume (maybe).
Here is a poem.


Living

My eyes are bloodshot
and my skin is tinged with green.
Looking in the mirror I see
a corpse, and I think
quite right.
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The roots of education are bitter, but the fruit is sweet.
— Aristotle