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ShadowVyper wrote:You people make me scared to go to bed...all the notifications I'll get. /cringes/



I know what you mean. You are definitely not alone :) Also, how is the relationship with Luna and Blair going to be?
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XD let's do this! I will be posting both of my characters hopefully tomorrow.

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I forget... When does Jerano the Jester dethrone Lordshire and become king again? Is it before or after he owns all the other characters in Ping Pong and streaks through the castle on a unicorn?

And I can't wait for the post where Miranda, Yamani, and Regina all declare their love for him at once, then fight over him.
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CowLogic wrote:I forget... When does Jerano the Jester dethrone Lordshire and become king again? Is it before or after he owns all the other characters in Ping Pong and streaks through the castle on a unicorn?

And I can't wait for the post where Miranda, Yamani, and Regina all declare their love for him at once, then fight over him.


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Oh wow. There goes the plotting, eh?
I'm not sure if you get one thing.. Yamani won't be in good shape, lol. She won't even be conscious, nor walk. She will need Thorn to fix her - and to do that, Haigha or the Hearts must find her. The kidnapping thing.. I don't know, I just don't really particularly see how that fits.

Perhaps it'd be better if she first gets fixed and send Haigha away because of all the stuff Reggy tells her, and then Lordie figures she's been let out of dungeon (though I thought he'd know, but nvm, Regina can do it on her own) and send Omni to get her back. Miranda, who has in the meantime found the Hearts' HQ (?), could send Blair there, and Blair could take Yamani again, while she's separated from Haigha and Haigha is all depressive and running into Brae and bla bla.
Brae and Haigha's way to Yamani needs to take time anyway, so it makes sense if they need to be looking for her - say Blair doesn't get her to Miranda's, because Mercury is after her so she doesn't want to show him where the HQ is, so she takes Yamani somewhere else.

Thoughts?
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Just woke up. 31 notifications. only one of them WASN'T FROM THIS THREAD.

Good morning to you too, guys <3

So I gathered that Erillian and Brae are gonna talk, Erillian already knows they heard everything (you two were surrounded by spiders), and in a couple of minutes he'll find out that Yamani and Haigha got ambushed, and exactly what happened there.

So what are Brae's attitudes towards Erillian?

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Yes ^^
Good morning xD

Now, Brae will be careful around Erillian. He knows there are spiders everywhere, so he figured already that Erillian knows everything about himself, Miranda and the kids. He'll be testing Erillian - he'll offer his hand, for one (I don't know if Erillian would know of his power, since he doesn't talk about it much), and he will ask for a demonstration of his powers. Brae isn't afraid of spiders like Yamani is, but he can force people to use their powers the way he wants them to, so don't tease him too much xP
Also he will ask Erillian how to adress him, and do so - but even if Erillian asks to be called The King of the Universe, Brae won't treat him any differently than an equal. Oh, and he will ask Erillian not to speak of his kids (and him) to Yamani or anyone. If Erillian asks for something in return, Brae might tell him that he knows Yamani already is pregnant, say.

I think it'd be nice if you put in something about Brae reminding him of Regina, since do far Erillian is the only person who more or less know them both, but it's up to you ^^
Oh, and before he hears of Yamani being taken, he should find out about the Whites' HQ being attacked - and Brae would then ask him to let Miranda know and rush home to help the kids.
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Grr. Morning :/
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Lord my computer crashes for one day and I come back to over 100 notificationsp ALL from the DT......



How the heck am I supposed to read up on all that? XDDD
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And one more thing, lol~ Brae will let Erillian know that he represents interests of the White Queen, but is not Miranda - everything he and Erillian talk about is between the two of them, and Brae is to blame for every wrong step of the Whites, no matter who has decided on taking it. Also he will ask to keep that deal between them as well.
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That does sound like something she would do, keeping the Queen of Hearts with her until she is certain that she's lost Mercury, until then Blair would radio into Miranda that she's being followed around and won't be back until she's lost Mercury from her tail.
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Poor Yamani. *sniff sniff*

I guess you can only be a tyrant for one SB before you have to reap the consequences in the sequel.

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Be warned Lordshire. ;)

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Aria, I do like what your plan. As for the fitting, LH and I are trying to get our characters to interact.

I will be posting my characters today hopefully.

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ShadowVyper wrote:Be warned Lordshire.


That's amusing. People actually still blame all on him :mrgreen:
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Yeah, Lordie's the good guy.
All he did was throw the Queens out of their own land and leave them for dead.
Nothing serious.
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