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For all those participating in the storybook, please post here for confirmation and all that good stuff. Then we can get on with sorting out the plot, relationships and, best of all, the villains :twisted:

Link to SB: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=95244&p=1063574#p1063574

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Laments of passion
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Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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Alright, this is gonna be great. Question about living arrangments, in the summary you mentioned a building. Is that our HQ?
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That is indeed our HQ. I haven't exactly figured out the architecture, but I might end up making a map of the grounds or something. However, I will need to know all of the characters in the SB before I can do this.

What I would like to see now though, is some suggestions for villains. I've got a few already, but it's always good to plan ahead.
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Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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Signing in ^^

Well, by character's brother is a villain ^^ We can include him in there as a NPC ^u^
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The villains will be used to make the storylines, because the SB's going to have chapters of sorts. More like episodes to be fair, so I'll need to think of the first chapter before we start. Including which villain/villains it'll have. That's why I am asking for suggestions.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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Well, the first villain should be kind easier, cause the team needs to learn how to work together, you know? ^^
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Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel,
Kyrie Eleison through darkness of the night




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I agree. The first chapter should be about the team getting to know each other and getting to grips with blending their powers and attitudes. However. I'm almost finished with the layout of the HQ, and I have two villain profiles; one for which is going to be a central antagonist in a later chapter.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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*nods* Sounds good ^^
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Here and ready to be notified!
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Here is the villain/villainess template for anyone who would like to suggest one. You can post suggestions for existing villains, but it would be nice to see some creativity! Keep in mind, if there are some things about your villain that should remain unknown, just fill in the area with '???'.

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Alias:

Real name:

Gender:

Age:

Appearance:

Abilities:

Character:

Description:

Other:

Theme tune:


That is all. :)

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Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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Hello DNX! I'll take a villain.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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Hey LH. Thing is, the villains aren't actually up for roleplaying in the SB, well, for now at least. I'll contact you later for when we require someone to actually play a villain (I certainly love that new proposition), however, in this first chapter we'll be using a NPC so we can introduce all the characters.

Also keep in mind that your character will eventually have to be apprehended; when I deem it necessary. You've certainly given me a new idea now, but for the moment there's not much for you to do. Sorry.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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I'll send you the profile I come up with, might help and its rather fun idea to have someone controlling behind the scenes.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

Formerly: Avalon



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