Writing Olympics Team ROR ^^

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Draknghar wrote:So you might say. But you did not have that much experience yet with the tablet, and as you said, it was rushed... Anyway, I liked it most out of the entries

And good morning!

Thank you ^u^

and Good morning! ^^ (although it's night here now ^u^)

how is this? I think I may have messed up my tenses. And this story was magorly edited so sorry about the quality. >.<
“They aren’t what they appear to be.” The boss’s voice rang in my head. I sigh. I work as a journalist in Japan. Boss does have a nose for news, but this time it’s off. The Ayuzawa‘s, are like any other family. That’s what I reported. He was close to re-assigning me but, I went and told them that the Ayuzawa’s were my neighbors. I sigh again.
“Sighing like that will suck away your happiness.” A voice came from behind. It was Ayuzawa Mimi. I smile back at her and then notice that she got yet another bulging plastic bag. I could have sworn that you could see the stink, seeping out.
“Why do you guys bring home garbage?” I ask.
“Why wouldn’t we?” She got me there. Reaching my gate, I see to it she reaches hers then wave goodbye. Stepping into my home, boss’s voice booms in my head.
“I tell you I smell news! If you don’t bring me back some you’re fired!” Smell news? He just smelt the garbage …That’s it! I look at their house. Was I really going to do this? Of course I was. It looked like the Ayuzawa’s were already asleep with the exception of Mimi . I notice that there’s steam coming out from a small window. She was taking a bath.
I climb over the wall run towards the little garbage shed…they built a shed! It was locked. Maybe because of Raccoons? I pick at the lock and get in. The smell hit like a tidal wave. Pinching my nose, I made it to the first bin. All that was inside it was garbage. Nothing strange in all bins. My search wasn’t getting me anywhere. Just then a cardboard box on the ground moved. A raccoon came out. So much for the lock, it ran and knocked over a bin. The garbage fell out. It went in the bin and ate the garbage then turned gold and everything it touched turned gold too.
‘Bingo.’

Nice ^u^ I like it ^u^ A little touch up would make it better ^u^ read through it again and it should be perfect ^u^ I like the idea ^u^


Here's mine ^^

Spoiler

~I rifled through my neighbors garbage.

Hey, don’t judge me! I can open my story however I want. And like you’ve never wondered about your neighbor. Everyone suspects each other of something. Everyone.

And in my opinion, the best way to know about them is to know their lowest level. Their garbage.

Anyway, so I was rummaging my way through David Cunning’s garbage.

Great, now you probably think I’m going through his trash cause I like him or that I’m obsessed with him. Let me just tell you now; No. I’m not.

You see, I’ve lived next to him for almost 4 years now. There’s something off with this kid. Trust me.

Sometimes, he’s just not ‘there’, like he’s daydreaming. But he’s not. Sometimes he keeps looking over his shoulder, like someone’s stalking him. But no one is. Sometimes, he’ll whisper to himself when he thinks people aren’t watching. But I am.

No! I’m not obsessed with him. I’m just . . . observant. Yah, that’s it. Observant.

Anyway, it’s not that I’m judging the guy. It’s just that he’s a little weird, and I’m a little curious.

There really was some interesting stuff in there; you really can tell a lot about a person by looking through their trash.

Two bottles of nail polish, old iron curler, lots of gum. Becka, David’s sister. Main-stream fashionista who likes jewelry. Hates losers.

In the next one, which I’m sure was David’s, I found; Tissues and Q-tips. What the heck? I thought. This is it? Really? I go rummaging through his garbage for used Q-tips? There’s nothing weird about this kid at all!

Then I found it. The pendant.

I lifted it carefully out of the trash, watching its clear blue surface shine in the sun. Well, this piece is a little odd.

“What the heck do you think you’re doing?!” I looked up to see David ten feet away from me. His eyes traveled from my face to the pendant in my hand “Give me that back! It's mine!”

I did the only thing a sane person would do.
I ran.~

I like yours. ^u^ its good.


(I don't think I can make any additional changes in mine .I'm not sure I can.)

(Ok ^u^ submit it! ^u^)

and, thank you ^u^

Sorry I missed out on event 4!

Kat! You won a bronze medal!

You are kind of the best member of this team, or so it appears to me ^^

wordsandwishes wrote:Sorry I missed out on event 4!

It's ok ^^ it was kinda tough anyway ^^

Draknghar wrote:Kat! You won a bronze medal!

You are kind of the best member of this team, or so it appears to me ^^

Thanks ^u^

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Event 5 is gonna be awesome!

heck yah it's gonna be ^u^

Hey, I just noticed something. We're the residents of randomosity right? So then why are we in the lounge?

. . . O0O

Anyway, I'm finished my entry for event 5!
Posting in progress...