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Cool!!! I never knew that!

I got this idea I've been working on.
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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This is kinda fustrating!! ^^''
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I know!!! It took me forever just to get the first draft done, and then I edited it and it looked like a tornado ripped through it all, but it all came together in the end :D
Don't give up, trust me, it gets easier after you finnish the first draft and get all the words down. Then all you have to do is change it up a bit (or a lot, depending...).
Oh, and one more thing: You're probably gonna have to veer away from your original idea a bit to make it work.
So, um, ya.




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What time does it end?
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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Here's mine ^^''

~Zoe woke to the smell of ash. Pain racked Zoe’s body. All she remembered was Prince Xander going crazy. Looking up, Zoe saw Xander among ruins.

Raging fire kindled inside.

“You bastard.” Muttered.

Xander turned back.

“You killed Kevin, Marie, Lana. Everyone.” Disbelief.

No reaction given. Just blank eyes staring from its apathetic, uncaring face.

“I’ll kill you!” Zoe exploded “Do you hear me?!”

Nothing.

“Murderer!! My friends will not have died in vain!” Words spoken in pain.

Xander was unfeeling.

“You jack-ass!” Her hands tightened around the grip of Kevin’s broken dagger.

“Die!" Zoe charged her old friend.

Nothing.~

*sai* I know it sucks but it took forever ^^'' What you guys think? ^^''
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Alas, I could not write mine >.< Sorry... :/
I was Amareth :)




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It's K ^u^
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@ Kat :
'' What you guys think? ^^''
I think it's good :) The way you added "Muttered" or "Disbelief" at the end made it very Dramatic. Post it!




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I did ^u^ it took so long and I put so much effort in it, how could I not? ^u^''
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True, I wonder when the results come back from each event. Do they do them separately? Or all at the end...
Anyway, the next event looks pretty interesting.




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Yah ^^ Although, I really don't get it ^^''
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Im really sorry Guys. my fault >.<
sorry
Last edited by zohali93 on Tue Aug 07, 2012 2:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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Okay, it's like this:

You're making up a new word for the dictionary. And you need to persuade them to use it.
(While following the guidelines of the event)

So ya, that's pretty much it.




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Ahh ^^ That clears it up a bit ^u^
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I'm just glad it doesn't have that whole 5-letter-limit thing.



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