My Loves

Nothing can rival my first piece of magnificence, but this comes close.

I like sharks
I like sharks
And money
And money
I'm so rich
I own a shark
Someday
I'm going to overtake
Animal Planet
And make
SHARK YEAR
Because Shark Week
Will never suffice

Thats very...nice. Although Shark Week's on Discovery Channel, not Animal Planet. Very dramatic...yeah, 'cause when you said that stuff it was...dramatic.

I like sharks
I like sharks
And money
And money
I'm so rich
I own a shark
Someday
I'm going to overtake
Animal Planet
And make
SHARK YEAR
Because Shark Week
Will never suffice

Thats what you have

This is what it should be

I like sharks
I love sharks
And money
It's great
I'm so rich
I own a shark
And someday
I'm gunna overtake
Animal Planet
And create
SHARK YEAR
Because Shark Week
Don't cut it

Eh? eh? Whaddayathink?

Very nice work though Sharty.

............ I like/love sharks too... and I never thought about making a shark year...
I'm not rich though...

(Oh well I love sharks and money too, it's awesome)

Words fall short of a poem that defies expression lol

Don’t you tell me what channel Shark Week is on! Don't forget who I am--the shark expert! i think I know what channel Shark Week is shown on. It's definitely not Discovery channel.

By the way, are you critiquing me?!! I did not come to this site to be critiqued, but to be admired! I suppose this is a rather cliché saying, but it has come time for me to admit it to myself: I am truly misunderstood. But isn’t that true for all artists?

You're not channeling Oscar Wilde by any chance, are you, Sharty? Not that he had a shark infatuation...

Isn't the time it takes to read, think over, and critique a piece of art the highest form admiration? ^_~

I happen to be friends with Oscar Wilde.

He didn't like sharks!

Ah. Well then, good luck with the ...poetry and all that that implies. ^_^

I don't think there's anything else to say; unless you've decided you'd like to have all your magnifecence read and critiqued.

Perhaps saying he and I are friends is a falsehood, for in truth, I thought he was rather cocky. And he did better than I in college! He cheated!

I refer you simply to my other post on a similar topic. While you're there, please read Dream Deep's as well.

Poor_Imp's right; there's nothing else to say.

Poor Imp wrote:I don't think there's anything else to say; unless you've decided you'd like to have all your magnifecence read and critiqued.

Well Imp, one can hardly crit brilliance...

Lol, you've got a LOT to learn, Sharty... But *struggles* but... I suppose it's nice to have you on board... *head/desk*

As for this piece, it was amusing, a quick read-through, but uhhh... I wouldn't exactly call it masterpiece, man...

Well Imp, one can hardly crit brilliance...

For once you speak in truth.

As for the fact you say I have a lot to learn? It is you, in fact, who is out of place, telling the man who grew up during the French Revolution that he has a lot to learn. You're quite correct it is nice to have me here.

every year should be shark year! very cute and enjoyable