Review Bonanza! Come one, come all!

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It's summer, the best season for reviewing!

I will review just about anything: Lyrics, Poetry, chapters from novels, essays, etc. but sorry, no fanfiction. I'm also not a big fan of fantasy but if you say pretty please with a cherry on top, I just might. You never know. ;)

I will review by pointing out the things about your work I absolutely love (trust me, they'll be something I love in everything I review) and the things that could use some revising or are just plain confusing.

Things such as: word fluency, word choice, memorable parts character development, yada, yada........

I will be completely honest without being too utterly harsh. And I'll try to be quick, too!

My reviews won't be perfect but I'll try my best!

So, who's ready?




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ME!!!!!
Can you please review this, pretty please with a yada, yada, yada.
It's a poem (NOT fantasy nor fan-fiction) work.php?id=96309
Sometime the world turns it's back on you. You don't need to turn your back on the world. You need to create your own world!




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can you please review my short story " the hypothetically dead man"?. here is the link work.php?id=96269.




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Just finished two FANTASTIC pieces! You should check them out! Alright, who's next?




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Oh, oh! Can it be me, please?

The second chapter of my story is in desperate need for feed back! :smt003

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Another amazing, amazing piece finished. Can't wait until the next chapter is out. In the meantime, who's next?



The capacity of human beings to bore one another seems to be vastly greater than that of any other animal.
— H. L. Mencken