Hi, this is very cool! The only thing I'm going to say with regard to the older image is that you have a much stronger background in the new and it's just generally more well done so I think we can set that aside and concentrate on the current piece of work.
Style
I love your style. It's a little mismatched, like that one tree over to the left looks a little out of place with the others, as does the on on the bottom and the one in the foreground on the right. What I'm trying to say is they're not all that consistent. Actually, the one on the foreground at the right? The white triangle really bothers me so maybe look at making that less obvious, the part where the trunk meets the leaves. Then you have those two trees at the bottom that just look like green triangles. Those bother me too. I'd say you either need to give them that little bit more detail or remove them and go straight to the background being there.
Hair
These headings are not making much sense, just me trying to gather my thoughts. Sorry, it's been a while since I reviewed art but anyway, the hair is generally amazing. The only part I'm not sure about is that rising tower of it in the background as I can't at all work out why the hair is doing that. Did she get it caught in a tree or something? In which case it would look better if it's all wrapped around the tree but yeah, not really getting that part.
The Girl
Everything about her is adorable and I have absolutely no bad words for the girl. Lovely choice of colour, fun, creative style. I'm maybe a little sad that she isn't more centralised but in general nothing bad to say.
The background
I think your moon needs to be a little brighter. I love what you did with the clouds but I almost didn't see the moon there and that's a shame because it's nice. Maybe just do something to make it stand out a little more. I love the shading on the cliff face, the little grass banks at the top and bottom and I like that you made the tree trunks white.
Overall
It's good! There are a few things that I wasn't so sure about but it's a rather fun picture and I had fun trying to follow where the hair goes. Maybe make that into a bit more of a game?
