Un-wanted

So the first pic is a cracked-out version of a sketch I did a while back. I fooled around with tons of layer commands and textures and the whole background in general.

The theme behind the sketch is like the title says, it's supposed to kinda show what happens when someone becomes "un-wanted" or unneeded. If you've ever had someone you were always there for, or really care about, who always seems to not want you back quite as much as you'd like, it hurts. So I drew something.

Obviously I didn't finish it or waste time on the hands or feet because it was a moody sketch, but feel free to critique anything else about it. I want to know your opinions ^_^

Cool!...actually...SUPER COOL!!!
These pics, even though moody have a great aura and it looks real good.
And who cares about hands and legs?? Pictures should talk on their own whether anything is missing. These missing parts add a different touch to it. However you might want to be careful when you add it intentionally. But since in here you did not complete the hands and legs with out any intention, your picture gets an air, the second one that is. The first picture looks mysterious. You have heard of Darker than Black (D.t.B) I suppose. If not then Google it. It is my favorite anime and you will know what I am talking about when i said mysterious. The first picture reminds me of D.t.B very badly. i like these types of pictures because there are simply no mistakes and they speak on their own. Good Work!!

Why hello again! So, I was exploring the site, because yours truly is STILL trying to figure out this new layout (XD), and I finally found the Art & Photography forum. So of course, I had to drop in on you! And what do I find when one of your titles piqued my interest? Elbows! And Knees! And on top of that the funky color... I don't even know what it's called but I love it (on the first image)! I am definitely impressed. But you know me, and I must be nit-picky! So I have a new assignment for you to improve upon. Now, that would be your shoes. Yes, your shoes. I had such a hard time trying to find something that I thought you should work on so I had to go as far as your shoes. The shapes are about right. All I need out of your shoes are some details. Right now, it looks like they are both wearing UGGs, and for one, I don't feel like guys often wear UGGs, and I feel like you're using those UGGs as a way out.
Your Friend,
Brook