Illuminist inc. Reviews

Hello, guys.
Your favorite Illuminist is back with his famously short (but to the point) reviews
What will I review? Fantasy, fantasy primarily. Sci-fi is also okay, as is action/adventure
What I most definitely won't review? Poetry and articles. Oh, and hugely long pieces of work, unless I adore it and have promised.
Anything else, link and I'll see what I can do (which will be review it, of course).

Do you review Scifi Fantasy? Lol xD

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It's a tad long, I'm currently splitting it into parts so that the people here can read it easier. It's twelve pages, AND IT'S ONLY THE PROLOGUE!

Yaay, first person to ask! (Unless somebody does this before me as I type this out)

hey.
can you review this please and thanks.

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I have reviewed both your works. Hope they helped.

? i cant really see it though?

What? No, I'm sure I did.

thanks!

My pleasure. It was originally longer, though

Double I, how about my novel? It's only four short chapters and a prologue at the moment.

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That's the revised prologue. Every chapter is attached to that as well.

Thank you!

Done, UpandOut15.

Hi there ItalianIlluminist. My name's Jalmoc, or Jal for short. I've been on this site forever, but I stopped for awhile and now I don't know who is who. But anyways, I've selected you (if you want to) to review my FanFic piece. I'm pretty easy going when something needs fixed, so just tear it up. It's a Star Wars piece by the way.

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It will be done. However, I lament my lack knowledge of the Star Wars universe.

I don't know how to do links.
Would you try to find and review Oggo the Dwarf's Adventure in the Underland please?
It's a Humorous Narrative Poem for younger readers.
If you can't find it then thankyou anyway.
P.S. Could anyone tell me how to find links?

Sure. To find links, simply copy/paste the link at the very top of the screen.
This is a link, for example chat.php
And yes, I'll get on it.

Yo dude, will you review this for a friend? Apparenlty I know more peoples on this site then him. work.php?id=94885