Axel

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For the short amount of time I spent on this I think it came out pretty good, but as always, I'm looking for critique. You guys do such an awesome job at reviewing my art, I realize that every time I look back at my old pictures and see how much I've improved xD I just don't say thank you enough! So to everyone who's supported me, reviewed, commented, liked, and just clicked to view my pictures, thank you!!!! It means a lot!

Oh, and here's the picture x)

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I named him Axel, no special meaning it just came to me.
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Oh, I love the colouring on the wings! Awesome blended gradient effect thingie. I don't have many comments on the rest of him, although he does have kind of a girly body, but I guess he could be one of those androgynous types. What is weird is his arm and his hand. His fingers and thumb are the wrong way round. Thumbs are on the inside, near the body, not on the outside. It looks like he's had his arms swopped.

Everything else looks fine--just that freaky weird hand.
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Cool. I really like the wings. But like Twit said, the hand is wrong. Maybe that's how you imagine him. I don't know. But I like it. :D




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YELLO!!!

Oh gosh, he's adorable :3
I love his eyes. With his black hair and... really, black everything, they really pop out with that bright green color. The red in the wings as well, surrounded by all that black it really pops out well.

I only have two critiques, one of which was already pointed out twice. The hand is backwards. Not hanging on that one, though, since, as I said, it was already pointed out twice.

The second critique I have is that either the arm is too big, or the body is too small. Although, the size of the head is proportionate with the size of the body, so I'd say the arm is too large. It's just kind of too.... beefy (?) compared to the size of his body. If you look, it even appears to be half the size of his chest, which I think a more appropriate size would be 1/3 the size of his chest, but that's really just a guess/estimation.

But yeah, other than that I got nothing :] love iiiit <3
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Man, you are awesome at digital coloring BlackSheep!
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Just like it! and the black really suits him and he is cute :wink: but when you look at his whole body- devilish wings and all, :o you know that that's someone you must not mess with, lol, I won't say anything much because the others said it...anyways, Good job! keep drawing! :D
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It's lovely to see you working with collarbones now :)

Just remember to keep the thumbs in the right direction!
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Very awesome coloring and all. The face and hair are marvelous. I enjoy the spear-with-a-spade-end thing as well.

However, his hand is the wrong way round (as has been pointed out), he may be missing his left arm completely (is it in the shadows?), and I'm pretty sure those wings are only fit for decoration. The latter thing is me being like "He wouldn't be able to fly!" in a Sheldon from Big Bang Theory sort of voice. Then again, decorative wings would still be bloody awesome. He looks like he's half pterodactyl. Who wouldn't want red-and-black pterodactyl wings? I mean, come on.

Anyway, you've definitely been improving, yeah, and you're still far better than me with my weird Max Beckmann style, I presume. ;)

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Okay you know I love you, and I love this guy, but I've got to say I'm disappointed. It seems in my abscence, you have not only improved in places, but in one place, but in another, you seemedd to have relapsed back into your old ways! The arm! The left arm is gone! And also, the weapon, it's demension is great up to the tip. There you lost the light.

On the flip side, this guy is hot, I must admit. He's kind of curvy though, which is a little feminine. But you've gotten over your elbow issues! Great, I love it! And his hair is perfect, and that, I wouldn't change. Also, I love those wings!

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