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Hello Toby. I have the beginning to a new story which I'm calling (although I might change it afterward) The Creaturesmaster. This is the Prologue. Thank you!

I'll get around to it as soon as I can Alfonso!

Finished!
Who is next?

Here Toby, it's Part 1 out of 2 of my short story.
work.php?id=90412

Finished Arah!
Anyone else?

Do I have to beg?

Dude, hai!

I have a story up here in six parts and it's all finished, and I have had a fair few reviews on it, so I understand if you don't want to do a review for each chapter, but I'd be really grateful if you could give me an overall opinion on it. ^_^

On here it's called Serpent's Teeth, but the title is actually Lenore. I think. Maybe. It might change again.

It's all in my Portfolio, which'll save space rather than linking to each chapter.

If you could give me your general impressions on it, I'd be really grateful.

-twit

Hiya Twit,
I'm going to get around to it this afternoon, but firstly, I clicked on it to see what it was, and my portfolio showed. Sorry.
0,o

Ah, maybe that's a subjective link?

Well here's a bunch of hyperlinks instead.

Spoiler

One: work.php?id=87228
Two: work.php?id=87574
Three: work.php?id=87606
Four: work.php?id=88035
Five: work.php?id=89059
Six: work.php?id=91263

Thanks!

Thanks!
I need to complete some Homework, but after that, I'll be on to it.

Hey Toby, I managed to fix Part 2, so here it is.
work.php?id=92561

Bringing back a old post though...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94422

Ah ha

Take this
work.php?id=94463
thanks

work.php?id=94552

I haven't finished it yet, and I know a few details, such as who Aryn and Brare are, but i'm in the Dragon Rider sb, and if you read it, it will make a bit more sense. Thanks for doing this. I really appreciate it!!!!!!!