Shooting Stars' Reviewing Company! (Open for Forever)

Welcome to Shooting Stars' Reviewing Company where no client is turned away! (most of the time, anyways...)

*cough cough* I will review almost any type of literature that you link to me below. This is the general way I'll review your work:
1) I'll introduce myself
2) mention what stood out to me/talk about the beginning
3) comments
4) summary
5) closing

Feel free to leave however many links of documents that float your boat and suit your fancy. Also, if you'd like to PM me about any other questions or comments I don't mind. Post away!!!
---Shooting Stars

Review my short story please viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92681

Hello! Could you review this for me please?
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=90961
Thank you!

Done, Rascallover!
I'm on it, DevinEWilliams!

Hey! Could you review chapters four and five of my novel? I had great reviews on the first three and they just stopped completely after that. The first three links are to my the first couple so you aren't totally lost. Thank you so much!

Spoiler

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=91191&p=941789&hilit=Recruited#p941789

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=91395&p=944301&hilit=Recruited#p944301

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=91566&p=944241&hilit=Recruited#p944241

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=91690&p=944929&hilit=Recruited#p944929

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=91909&p=946396&hilit=Recruited#p946396

*EDIT, EDIT, EDIT*
*Review, submit, DONE*
Finished, Rascalover and Devan!
Next, please! Stack those requests up.
---Shooting Stars

Just finished, UpandOut! Any other reviews?

Could you perhaps take a look at a poem I wrote? It's called Sense.

Finished! Next request, please!

WIll you review this for me? It's kind of long, so if you are up to reviewing it, it would be greatly apprieciated.
viewtopic.php?f=16&t=92360
Thanks,
Emmy

Emmylou, I will most definitely NOT review your story... JUST KIDDING! I'll get on the new requests as quickly as possible. Love y'all!
---Shooting Stars

For some reason it says the forum is locked where your stories are, so I'll check them out again later!
---Shooting Stars

Hey Shooting Stars, about a month ago, my sister (before she got her own account) posted a story called Racing on the Wind. She needs a review bad. I requested a review on someone elses review-thingy but so far they have not done anything. So here is the link:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93152

Also (and you don't have to) if you have the time, could you review my work (called (Book One) The Hunter)? It's just the prologue and I have edited it. I need to finish it before I start on the first chapter and no one seems to be interested in looking at it. So here is the link (just in case you want to review it):
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93092

Thanks. .

Sorry, forgot to say... NEXT, PLEASE!