The Gate (Started, but Accepting)

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This is an idea my sister and I came up with years ago, it's kinda complicated but I think it would be a fun storybook.

There are two lands, they are separated by a Gate. This Gate isn't so much an actual gate as it is a fabric, almost like an invisible fabric that separates the two worlds. The fabric his started tearing, originally the Gate with only passable when one reached the highest stage of magic, but now with the fabric torn, creatures from each world passing to the other.

Gleia
In this land, everyone has magic within them, but only a few are trained in the ways of magic. Those have been trained travel the land in pairs searching for others to train. At each village they stop in they test the children at the age of 14, each child produces an orb in their hands, the orbs color determines the strength of the magic in that person's soul the colors are as follows:
~Red/Yellow – the highest level, anyone in this group is immediately signed up for training under one of the Testers
~Gold/Blue – is at the same level as Red/Yellow, these are also powerful new
~Green – beneath the two highest, these are trained based on there brightness
~Orange and White are the lowest levels, and most people fall in this category. They are not trained
~Black/Purple – the dark colors, these are the colors of those with truly evil souls
Every person in Gleia had a Soul Speaker, an animal that is the manifestation of the person's soul.Though the Soul Speakers cannot talk, they communicate on a high level with their humans, each always knows how the other feels and can sense if the other is in danger

Halar
In this land, only a select few have magic, the rest slowly turn to horrible creatures known as the Dread as they progress through life. Those who do have magic in their lives trying to keep the Dread, most fail and become Soul Speakers in the other land. Those who succeed eventually find their way to the highest magic and cross over the Gate to Gleia.

With the fabric torn, Dreads are traveling to Gleia and the Blacks and Purples from Gleia are finding their way to Halar. The highest order of magic is struggling to keep the lands separate, but they are slowly failing.

Characters Needed:
Gleians: AllessandreP, ShootingStars, untameabletiger, xXmusicaXx, youngwolf1105, LostMagi42
Testers: Jagger, (?)
Soul Speakers: AllessandreP, UpAndOut15, ShootingStars, xXmusicaXx, youngwolf1105, LostMagi42
Dreads: Redfang18, (?), (?), (?), (?)
Halarans: (?) (?) (?) (?) (?)
Black Orbed Gleians: (?) (?)
Purple Orbed Gleians: FlowerPower (?)
High Orders: (?) (?) (?) (?)

There can be more than this, but this is how many I need before the story can start. You can only have two characters

Profile (human)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
Orb Color (If Gleian):
Romance?:
Extras:
Profile (Soul Speaker)
Name:
Gender:
Animal/Appearance:
Human:
Extras:
Profile (Dread)
Name:
Human Name:
Gender:
Appearance:
Extras:

Anything can be added to these, pictures would be nice for the humans and Soul Speakers. Here's mine, my two are a Soul Speaker and her human

Name: Satomi
Age: 14
Gender: female
Appearance:wears a long, torn up cream white gown, barefoot
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Personality: Satomi is quiet when she first meets you, but if you take the time to get to know her, she opens up like a flower. With no memory her past, she has little to go on other than what she knows right now, many people find her lack of memory disturbing, but those who don't find that she's no different from anyone else.
History: Has no memory
Orb Color (If Gleian): Gold/Blue
Romance?: Open for if the person truly cares and she feels the same
Extras:One strange quirk is that her right eye changes colors occasionally from green to blue

Name: Tenebrae
Gender: female
Animal/Appearance: Black panther
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Human: Satomi
Extras: lost her memory when Satomi did. Doesn't really like people
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May I reserve a spot for a soul speaker?
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Hey, Shooting Stars here! This is an interesting concept, so I think I'll join! Yes, first person! :D
Human
Jaqueline Freeman

Age: 13 (almost 14)

Gender: Female

Appearance: Jaqueline is pretty tall for her age, she has a medium muscle tone, long legs, wavy chocolate brown hair, lush pink lips, cute button nose and beautiful sky blue eyes with thick lashes. Jaqueline wears Glaien-style clothes, but they resemble ours. She is fashionable, but to her it's not the biggest priority.

Personality: She is mostly a quiet person until she warms up to you. Speaking to people comes easily to her, but if she doesn't have to she'd rather not. She is tenderhearted and can be hurt easily, but accepts apologies without hesitating. Jaqueline is a loving person, and is loyal to friends. However, she has a sharp side to her. She is very intelligent and likes to analyze situations before acting, and is also curious about everything. She is wicked fast with a bow and arrow, and can use swords with ease. Strong in combat, with magic or weapons.

History: Her parents used to mistreat her, but you could never tell just by looking at the girl. She ran away from home at the age of six to a village a few miles from her own, where an elderly couple took her in. When she was ten, her new parents discovered how much magical power was locked inside her. They have been training her briefly in this subject until she meets the Testers. Jaqueline has always wondered how she inherited so much magical talents, and wants to find out if her real parents were the same as her because they never showed it.

Orb Color: Deep red

Romance: Still slightly wary about trusting another human after what her parents have done. However, yes if she gets to know you well.

Extras: Will do anything for those she loves like family or friends.
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Soul Speaker
Croslira

Gender: Female

Appearance: Silver Phoenix

Human: Jaqueline Freeman

Extras: Loyal, just like her owner. Very smart.
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saving a spot for a magic Gleian




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Are the Dreads evil or violent or are they just normal people who are deformed?
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Evil and violent most of the time, I'm sure there are some who arent but most are. They are like the manifestation of the evil in the human soul, the bad version of a Soul Speaker, an extremely small number of people have no evil in their souls, and they would still be Dreads, they just wouldnt act like them
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Then I shall be one of your Dreads. Profile will be made in due time.
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Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

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Also, just as an idea, It'd be cool to see a human as they slowly transformed into a Dread... Too bad I already have two characters :)
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I might go as a Dread as well, profile will be up in a bit
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Profile (human)
Name: Mirane (Nickname : Ane)
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Ane is short, with light brown hair and green eyes. She often ties her long hair up, and is accustomed to carrying a quiver of arrows and a customized bow wherever she goes. She also carries two small pouches at her waiOst; one for her money and the other for for healing herbs. Her ling pointed ears make her look like an elf. They're due to a genetic disorder that gives her her green eyes, which do not occur in any of her other family members.
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Personality: Mirane is an mature yet, childlike girl. She is a skilfull archer and has a lively personality. She does not hesitate, and is confident in her decisions. However, being both mature and immature at the same time, she can be quite a handful.

History: Mirane was the only child of a young couple. However, her mother died soon after giving birth to her, and her father followed a few years later. Her grandfather raised her, and taught her archery, in which she quickly gained mastery. At 14 years of age, her orb was deemed worthy to be trained.

Orb Color (If Gleian): Bright, burning green, which looks almost gold.

Romance?: She always says she will fall in love only one her Soul speaker find a mate.

Extras: Though she is an unbeatable marksman, Ane doesn't like to kill animals. She is a vegitarian by nature, and learned about herbs and their healing properties under the grandmotherly village medic Natira.



Profile (Soul Speaker)
Name : Vanilla
Gender: Male
Animal/Appearance: Vanilla is a very normal, snowy white barn owl. He has green eyes which match the color of Ane's orb, and brown wings woth dark markings on them.

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Human: Mirane

Extras: Mirane found Vanilla when he was a baby. She was practicing in the forest, and she killed his mother by accident. She saw the nest, and noticed an owlet of two, maybe three months, and decided ti take fare of it. In turn, Vanilla as an owlet, would always sit on Mirane's windowsill at night. Since then, Mirane has been a vegetarian.
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Name: Nemesis
Human Name: Drake Runestone
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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Extras: He has a weapon hidden on his person, specifically a dagger small enough to hide in a boot. He's also armed with a sword that's on his right hip, due to the fact that he's left-handed.
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The sword- Dragonslayer Image
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Profile (human)
Name: Kiahautu
Age: 15
Gender: female
Appearance: She has long, flowing red hair and glowing emerald green eyes, wears a long dress with a knife straped to her leg that can never miss it's mark.
Personality: She is powerful and bold, she has no fear. But if you get to truely know her, she's sweet and loving.
History: She grew up with only her father and a brother and was raised to be tough and free-willed.
Orb Color (If Gleian): red/yellow
Romance?: She is promised to a man in Gleia, but she does not love him.
Extras: She is an expert at archery and anything that involves weaponry
Profile (Soul Speaker)
Name: Loreto
Gender: male
Animal/Appearance: pure white wolf with the same glowing emerald green eyes
Human: Kiahautu
Extras: Can change colors and only speaks to people who are close to him or his human.
We were made to corageous,
We're taking back the fight.
We were made to be corageous,
And it starts with us tonight.

And the only way we'll stand,
Is on our knees with lifted hands.
Make us corageous,
Lord make us corageous. - Casting Crowns




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***Reserve spot for female human with purple orb***
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