Hai! Okay so I really like this. I just wanted to say that first becausue I think the colours are amazing and I love the juxtaposition of the really clear, outlined wonder woman against the vague, very blurred background.
I do have a few things to point out though!
1. I'm not sure what the random pieces of 'fire' in he foreground are? Part of me thinks they're petals since you've pointed out that she thing she'd holding is a burning flower but I really wasn't sure. Either way I'd suggest thaat those need to go as well?
2. A handle for the whip would be nice! I think you should just about be able to see the top of it. You see, normally the end that you hold on to is thicker and sometimes has rope coiled about it or other times might be plastic. I don't quite remember what Wonder Woman's looked like but a quick bit of research would help you there.
3. Her bum cheek is really awkward. Her body is great and really toned but then you have this sagging bum cheek which realy makes me feel bad for the girl. Just uh... round it off a little more? I also wonder if the legs could do with a little more muscle on them.
4. I love the whip, the outfit and the hair. I have absolutely no criticism for any of those three parts, seriously.
5. I'd have liked to see a clearer expression! You see I'm not sure if she'd angry or happy or sad. It's quite hard to tell as her eyes look kind of sad and wistful, but she seems to be smiling so I'm left a little confused as to what's going on in the image!
Overall: I really love the drawing! It's fun, colourful and the proportions are great. Very good work,
I really like this picture! I'm uber impressed at how clean the line art is. I have never drawn that smoothly.
My favorite parts of this is her expression, her hair (I like the little loose strands and the highlight in the middle) and the coloring of her outfit. The top portion has such a fire-y look to it.
I think the skin would've been colored perfectly if you didn't have that yellow stuff on her legs and butt. It looks like someone smeared butter on her or something.
Also, I wish the red boots would've had the same shiny-ness as the top part of her outfit did. You didn't shade them as much as the rest. Oh, and the fog/smoke stuff is concealing her shoes, which I don't like.
I like the background for the most part. The flames rising up out of the ground make me feel like she's standing inside a volcano or something. I think it's just the fog stuff that looks dull compared to the rest of the picture.
Hope this helped!
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