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Hey guys!
I'm back! You missed me?:)

Anyways, I'll keep this short and simple, you want a review? You got, it, just post a link at the bottom with the title of it and what forum it goes in. My strongest point in reviewing is short stories of any genre and my weak point is advanced critiques.
So please, request away!

-Arc ;)
(p.s. If it's fan-fiction, please state what the fan fiction is about because if it's something I've never heard of there I probably won't be that helpful, sorry :( )
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Done with both! :) Who's next?
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Title: My dearest Walter
Forum: other (it's really like a short story, just in letter form)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=91640
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Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
viewtopic.php?t=90746
Chapter one:
viewtopic.php?t=90955
I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae




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Done! -Who's next?
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topic91742.html
Reviewing this for me would be awesome!!
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Hi Arctic Monkey!

I need reviews on this please: topic91820.html

It's an other piece and it's the back story of how the world in my novel came into being.... from the one we live on now. Will you be able to check if anything isn't plausible/if there are inaccuracies or things that couldn't happen?

Thanks! I'll be glad to return the favour.

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The work I'd like reviewed is my debut on my new profile:
viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92645
Its a fantasy, and it's called Elemental Lands: Intro
Thanks!
Allessandre P
I was on here as Allessandre, but I changed my email and forgot about this site for a while. By the time I came back, I'd forgtten my password. My old account
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