A Sketch

This is good! I think you have the body proportions down for the most part, but I think what needs the most work is the head/face. Your eyes seem a little too big and it almost looks like the head is like..squarish on the left cuz it just disappears behind the hair. But again..good job withe the body proportions! That's usually extremely hard to do.

I love her position, but the head is a little abstract. I think you could work on that, definitly. It's good, and you are really precise on shading. So overall, you did very well exept the face. Her shape is a little off, and her eyes might need a little work, too. It's a very good sketch, and if you keep on working on that face, it will soon be maserful.

Thank you. Clearly I failed with the face I tried to draw the 3/4 and slightly upraised head and I probably messed up with lip positioning and jaw line.
Thank you again

The Sketch is amazing! Very detailed. good job:)

Hey Vettan!

This is a really good piece, presuming that you're not really an artist but partly can draw well, yes?
I pretty much loved it because I myself can't draw so much. Hehe (Y)

But I surely know how to judge on photographs, so hey! So let's work this out a little more properly, okay? ^.^

Now on to the nitpicks.

1) The head is a little big for the body and the lips looks smudged on the face. I didn't like the face much. Sorry. :S

2) The clothing is awesome but I guess you could have given it a little more shade. Yeah. But it was good to look at! <3

3) The hair is absolutely fantastic. You've made it amazing and I like the way it suits the picture drawn. So, good job!

Overall: Good! You can work it up a bit more, so next time you can be a better artist! 8/10 for this one! (Y)

Keep Drawing, Mate!

Love,
Cookie. ^o^