Lady Beatrix Academy For Young Gifted Ladies

hey This happens to be my first ever storybook so please forgive me for any mistakes and blunders I may make.

Ok well this may seem a bit over-rated but I really wanted to do a vampire themed book so "Ladie Beatrix Academy" is essentially a private boarding school for teenage vampire girls, and upper class ones at that. Set in High School.
(It's kind of like 'Vampire Knight' only without the day class and isn't co-ed, although there will be a neighbouring boys-vamp school).

I'm looking for commitement and EFFORT in correct punctuation and spelling (please keep it the most accurate as you can but i understand if you make a couple of mistakes).

Also the characters shouldn't be a Mary/Gary Sue although being vampires the girls will have super enchanced senses, strength,speed,healing,intellect and phisically good-looking. The PERSONALITIES however, should be a whole range and realistic including both "good" AND "bad" characters. You can make up to 3 characters maximum and they could be either students or teachers or maybe a mixture of both. For the girls' school all staff and students are FEMALE, the opposite applying for the boys' school. (I have already made up the Headmistress who is the Lady Beatrix)

Most of the story is set in LBA (Lady Beatrix Academy) but sometimes will centre onto a different scene (a school trip perhaps or maybe a classmates house for the holidays ect...) and other times at the boys school.

What I am looking for mainly is a group of friends at the school and therefore am restricting it to only a couple of people and the best characters.
Plus the group of friends should be neither too small or too big thus depending on how well your character profile is your charcater could get picked to be inside "the intimate circle", maybe just another student/friend whose there, even the protogonist or a teacher.

Write down your charaters profile, like/dislikes and extra details.
Have fun and hope you like the idea!

Hey! I saw no one replied so I thought I would. I will try and look on and participate as much as possible.

Name: Annalise Beaux

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: Medium length auburn hair with side-bangs, hazel eyes, long dark lashes, short height but regal bearing, less pale that normal vampires, slender fingers, hour-glass shaped, long legs.

Attitude: Annalise always speaks her mind, she is very frank and relies on wit and charm not brutishness to win her followers over. She is very meticulous and obsessed with manners. She is always looking for a boy to take care of her. She has very romantic notions, and enjoys blood but doesn't want to.

Likes: Books, manners/propriety, nice clothing, boys, and friends.

Dislikes: Brutishness, gossip, people tricking her, mud.

Name: Emily

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Appearance: Emily is pretty but sickly and exhausted. She has scraggly, white-blond hair, and dull grey eyes. Her frame is tall and skinny, with pointy ears, thin lips, and a button nose. She usually wears drab sweaters and jeans. She is, in fact, kind of sick, because she had leukemia when she was turned into a vampire. For this reason also, her skin has an almost transluscent quality, paler than that of most vampires.

Personality: Despite her lack of energy, Emily is still strong and kind. She is a bookworm and likes to paint. In addition to this, she has a vampiric dog, a dalmation who she bit after first being changed but never killed because of guilt and a love for dogs. She is the quiet girl in the back of the room, with good grades and nice manners, but people usually accept her out of pity. She would rather have died than become a vampire, so she is also somewhat bitter. She plans to find the mysterious person who changed her, to kill him. So I guess you could say she holds grudges. Oh, and she's very serious in demeanor.

That's about it. PM me if I need to make any changes.

Ms. Zela VanAllen

*Occupation- Sanationem Teacher

*Appearance- She is about 5'2" and 123 lbs. Her skin is olive toned due to her Native American descent. Her black hair hangs down to her hips. It's usually pulled back into a ponytail. Her eyes are a deep brown, appearing black with little distance. Her hips are slightly too wide for her otherwise little body.

*Personality- She is a tough teacher only because she expects the best from her students. Despite this she tries to be a friend and a confidant. She is friendly and slightly nerdy.

*Aspirations- She hopes to not only teach Sanationem but also AP (Advance Placement) Sana. She also plans to get revenge on some people from her past.

*Previous Life- A medicine woman of her tribe before she was made a vampire.

*Likes- Medicine, good music, books, playing piano, going out, looking nice, and vengence. (Going on missions too xD)

*Dislikes- Being alone, being thought of bad, and old blood to drink.


{Sanationem meaning Healing. Also called Medicinus}
P.M. Me

Name: Brynn Cortois

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance: She has a dancers build, stands about 5'4'' and is about 110lbs though she is slight she overcompensates for this by her aggressive and tough demeanor and her constant harsh expression. She has long thick, very straight, dark brown hair with long, straight bangs. Her eyes, constantly narrowed, are amber with flecks of green. She dresses very formally and conservatively for all occasions, never wearing anything with bright colours or patterns. She has very abrupt and jutting features, a thin mouth, and a hard disposition.

Attitude: Brynn is extremely formal in her speech and in the way that she acts. She is also very distant and appears as if she is anywhere but where she actually is. She is very pedantic and fiery with her speech, often starting arguments for her own entertainment. Though she seems secretive and shady she is actually very reliable and motivated. She gives off the impression of being very worldly and clever and enjoys manipulating people and situations to her advantage, or just for fun. Though she is often solemn, she is always calculating. She does not like being alone, but she does not go out of her way to make friends. She does not have a very good moral compass however, and chooses justice over mercy.

Likes: Gourmet cooking, astronomy, horses, well-dressed and intellectual guys, and calligraphy.

Dislikes: Noise (laughing, yelling, whistling...etc), dogs, people who cannot dress well, pointless things.

Other: Definitely up for love. She also has an uncanny ability to tell when people are lying.

Name: Blaze (Riley) Lockhart (She's one of my characters in a future story I'm writing which has a somewhat similar setting, hope that's ok as I still need to develop her.)

Age: Looks about 16

Looks: She has extremely fair skin which matches her platinum blond hair. She has dark eyelashes and large gray eyes. She has a tiny, straight nose and pale white lips, which gain color only when she's fed recently. She's about 5'6 and slim. She walks with poise and elegance, but despite that she's a fighter. She adores vintage/goth clothing and is usually seen wearing that. She wears black nail polish, and when she's not at school, red lipstick and mascara.

Personality: Blaze is a rebel and a bitch. She enjoys sneaking out of the school to 'hunt'. She sucks the blood out of random humans which she seduces using her charm, looks and wit. She feels no compassion towards the human race who are just a source of food to her. Blaze is a fighter. She is extremely gifted in different types of martial arts, capable of using various weapons and a notorious killer. She has killed many of her own and many other supernatural creatures, because before she came to this school she was a hired assassin for a private vampire company which dealt with removing 'threats of the vampire community'. Blaze got the chance to come to this Academy because of one of the company's benefactors who felt that she had to be protected after a particularly difficult mission in which her safety was threatened as well as the safety of the company. In order to ensure that nobody finds her and tortures her for information, she was placed here under a false identity. Instead of keeping her last name, Riley, she took the benefactor's name, Lockhart and was to pose as his daughter. She doesn't let people cross her or her friends. She's a loyal friend who would rip anyone to shreds if they dare cross her or one of her friends, be it with her witty remarks or her other talents. She fits in pretty well into the Academy, despite her dark past which she has difficulty not dwelling on.

Name - Kayos DelRent
Nickname - Kay
Gender - Male
Age - 17
Occupation - Student
Languages - English, French : Bilingual

Appearance - A lean male student with narrow green eyes and thick, shaggy black hair that falls onto his forehead. His facial features are well sculpted aside from the very pale, but tell-tale sign of a scar crossing from temple to jawline. He is well muscled and stands at a height of 5'6. This male vampire dresses rather formally, seeing as he was turned in a 1700ds, but he has adapted his clothing to something more modern. Kayos carries with him a handgun, for uses he has yet to specify, but it is always hidden in the inside of his pin-striped coat. Kayos also takes care to write his every experience into a journal, of which he has thousands that list his experiences of different time periods.

Personality - Kayos is a vampire whom does not very much care for anything. He seems to be quite emotionless and distant but there are times when his civile nature is corrupted with a sudden urge of vilolence most used when angered. He is short-fused, but very good-natured and loves a good laugh. He is charming and especially a gentleman when concerning females, though he doesn't appreciate jibes or snide remarks. Kayos can be quite solemn though is quick to smile when the mood needs lightening and sends a quick bout of wit to brighten anyone's humour. He is quite a contraste and his moods vary depending on the situation.

Sexual Preference - Females
Up for love? - Yes
Current Relationship - None

Likes - Equestrianism, Astronomical Discovery, Modern and Past Art, Writing.

Dislikes - Scent (Perfume, etc.), Canines, Uncivile and Uneducated People.


- Hope he is taken into consideration, thank you.

-- > ((Sorry for the double post, my computer froze.))

So, when is this story book getting started anyway?

Name: Jack
Age: 17
Family: Son of Lady Beatrix if allowed? If not, he can be the child of another member of the staff.He is a pupil at the boys school.
Looks: Exceptionally attractive, even for a vampire. Very pale skin. Deep dark eyes with thick lashes and long, dark hair. Tall and thin but very muscular.
Skills: Academically he cannot be bothered. However, he is a very talented musician. He is also a womaniser. He seduces the vampires at his mothers school as well as young human girls in the nearby neighbourhood, sometimes turning them into vampires but mainly just drinking their blood.
Relationship: None steady.
Up for love? A very special vampire girl could make him enter a caring relationship, but for now he will mostly be involved in flings.

Name: Amalie O'Dwyer
Age: 16
Appearance: Quite small, slight and unobtrusive. She is pretty, however, and was as a human as well. She has short, softly bobbed dark brown hair and large, soulful grey eyes and long lashes, a pointed nose and a little, deep red mouth.
Personality: Quiet and shy. She is very smart and excels at all her subjects and fond of the arts and literature. She is rather awkward physically. She is very pleasant and likeable, but finds the other vampires terrifying. She hates herself for wanting to drink blood as she has not been a vampire very long.
History: She was turned into a vampire by Jack, and is desperately in love with him. She is insanely jealous of any vampires he is involved with. Her love could possibly turn vengeful and violent though.
Up for love? Definitely with Jack, but can't at the moment imagine with anyone else. Could possibly end up with a nice chap like Kayos, if anyone's characters would be interested.

when is it going to start?

I'm anxious to start too ! This sounds like fun! I even pmed Book Princess but got nada. Think she went AWOL on us

Well what should we do? I'd really like to start.

Sionarama wrote:Well what should we do? I'd really like to start.

I think we should wait for a couple of days, and if she doesn't show up, start? If everyone else agrees, of course