Snake Road

The serpentine path winds ever forward;
it twists and turns and curls, indecisive.
Tis sly and quick as it slithers onward.
It treads carefully but still impulsive.

A foe so cunning, sleuthy and willing!
To defeat him, strategy will prevail;
be positive, limber, and fulfilling!
Tis too easy when fighting snake to fail.

So loose your limbs in preparation now.
The avenues ahead are full of mow.

I like this I did'nt find anything wrong but thats me im more on a spelling person not a looking at things like " ;< ,, thats is not my strong point.

Hi there paintingtherain97!

You've got style, my friend! XD Okay, so this poem is certainly different from what I've read. You have nice vocabulary, and you seem to make amazing stuff with just a few words. The punctuation seems kind of weird... but the truth is that I'm not sure whether if it's wrong or not, because I'm horrible punctuating. xD

But you've done an amazing job! Keep it up!

~Solly<3

Very nice. Good use of vocabulary. Good ideas. I have one problem though. I know you used "Tis" so that the lines would fit as an iambic pentameter but I think it sounds a bit out of place. The rest of the language is poetic but not Elizabethan poetic so when you slip in "Tis" it sounds a bit wierd. But now on to the good stuff.

The serpentine path winds ever forward;
it twists and turns and curls, indecisive. Indecisive is a good word choice.Tis sly and quick as it slithers onward.
It treads carefully but still impulsive. Great line!A foe so cunning, sleuthy and willing!
To defeat him, strategy will prevail;
be positive, limber, and fulfilling! Nice!Tis too easy when fighting snake to fail. The whole stanza is great!
So loose your limbs in preparation now.
The avenues ahead are full of mow.
I think you need two more lines to finish it. It sounds a bit unfinished.

Great poem all in all! Keep writing.