Emotional Spectrum

Reddened anger, heart-wrenching desire,
white with innocence, but black with fire.
Blue with sorrow for it cannot be easy,
yet yellow with sunlight that’s making us queasy.
Pink for youth and green for ease,
love’s a light bent through us,
two matched entities.

Hi There Story Weaver.

Your poem is quiet nice, even though it's short, I enjoyed it. I loved how every line rhymes with the next one. Though, it kind of made me tilt my head in the end, since I expected another line with a word that would rhyme with 'entities'. I think maybe you could make it a bit longer.

Overall, it was great. I love how you used the meaning of colors! I LOVE THAT!

Great job! Keep Writing!

~Solly<3

Hello there,
I enjoyed reading this poem because it is so similar to my own writing style .... Short sweet and to the point...
I Love the emotion and spirit put into this tiny poem ... for such a little poem it has alot of meaning!

Lorna
xx

Hi!
I liked your poem. It had nice language and a nice rhyming scheme. The ideas were good aswell. I think its a bit short though. You could go into more depth about the different emotions and colours and that would make it very powerful and expressive if you do it right. I do like the idea of using colours to describe emotions. Good job.