I think his head's a bit too big for his body... other than that, i'm quite proud :') I did this sausage and circle thingy :3
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Hello xox Wow First Of All Im Speechless That Is Utterly Awesome And So So Detailed I Was Drawn In By The Name And That Fact It Was Art And Photography As I Love Art And Photography ^^ But Yeah Its Very Very Detailed Must Have Took Such Along Time Love The Coloured Sketch Areas And The Detailed Face Showing "Supermans" Emotion Well Done xo I Hope To See More Of Your Work And Shall Follow You xoxox -Sian xox
You're right about the head =] It's just a touch too big. But the detail you have is really amazing. The shading, the highlights in the hair, everything is really well done. I don't have too much to say about this because, besides the proportions, I really don't see anything wrong with this. A great piece =]
This is really well done. First off, I noticed the lines were really rough and present in the drawing, which brings out a different side of it altogether. It is fine with his body because you want to portray it as very muscular and abnormally strong, like Superman is, but in his face, it seems a little bit weird. I would imagine softer lines for it, but it does go with the rest of the body.
As for his head, it is a little tiny too big for the rest of him. It is probably the first thing I noticed, and I couldn't put my finger on what was wrong with it until I read what you wrote. It's not that bad though and I seriously think you did an amazing job with this drawing.
Keep up the good work!
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haha, I love this! It's got a great cartoony feel to it. I didn't really think the head looked odd, but when I scrolled down I thought that the legs and waist were way too small. Like, his chest is twice the size as his butt. It looks really imbalanced to me from the waist down.
Also, you didn't really leave room for the feet. I used to do this all the time! To fix it, I found that mapping out the figure first, before you add details, makes it so that you have room for everything on the paper. Just make really light lines where the head and shoulders and legs and stuff will be, and that way you won't be halfway through drawing and realize you forgot to leave room for hands or feet ^_^
The coloring and shading looks awesome! I love his facial expression too!
Keep it up
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