I'm a newbie and have posted up three parts of the first draft of my current story and would love some reviews! The links (in order) are:
topic89354.html
viewtopic.php?t=89360
viewtopic.php?t=89369
Any comments or constructive criticism is very welcomed.
In return, I will happily review any of the following:
Short Stories (General, FanFic, Romantic and Fantasy)
Novel (same genres as above)
Poetry (Dramatic and Lyric)
Thank you
