No name (sorry again)

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Haha again my days hasn't been all smiles and giggles but please comment... Oh and comment with a title please, I'm open to all ideas.

Your words burn inside of me like molten lava.
Your face is permanently etched into my mind.
Your voice is forever in my soul.
But your love is what will leave.
And hopefully,
Never come back.

Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best reviewer haha.) I like how you compare your feelings to molten lava, kinda spices things up.

I think that Forever Here but Forever Gone might be good for a title? But it's up to you. I just hope that you can get happier feelings into your writing.

Well Keep On Writing!!!

--Jalmoc

Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best reviewer haha.) I like how you compare your feelings to molten lava, kinda spices things up.

I think that Forever Here but Forever Gone might be good for a title? But it's up to you. I just hope that you can get happier feelings into your writing.

Well Keep On Writing!!!

--Jalmoc