Humanity's Fool

When hopes wall falls down and breaks,
humanity realizes it made a mistake.
Conspiracy taken by those who rule,
soon they'll notice; humanity's fool.

Fact or fiction? choose or die,
take the lead and master time.
Free of will but trapped in needs,
humanity sows its evil deeds.

Good message, loved the first line.

The rhyme scheme seemed a little simplistic for such a deep message, though.
Maybe change that?

Anyway, good job on this.

I agree with dream deep. The rhyming was not right for the message you are trying to convey. Also i think make your poem longer. But i did like some of the lines, they were really well written.

That sounds alot like today's world. Very good.