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Last edited by zombi3girl on Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:32 am, edited 3 times in total.




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I honestly have to say that this one surprised me, and in a good way. I enjoy reading good old fashioned zombie survival and post nuclear stories as much as the next guy, but you have to admit, the market is a tad saturated. This is....I don't even know what kind of crazy stuff is going on here. This was a pleasant surprise from what I assumed from the title. It seems like it would be really dark if you continued it, but in a fun way. The general tone of the story seemed to lack seriousness, but that is a good thing. Makes the it seem like fun reading.
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Ok... this one definitely surprised me. I enjoy reading horror books and when I read the first couple of lines, I did think it would have zombies in it, instead of giant spiders.

There is one small problem with the setting, as I personally think it isn't original in my mind as many apocalyptic books/films whatever, will usually go with the orange/brown type of wasteland. The characters didn't take the fact that outside was orange which was unusual in a good sort of way.

Overall though... pretty good. Keep up the good work!
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