Love. It's all i think about!!

On rainy days, I cannot smile.
The sun's been gone for quite a while.
But when I see your smiling face,
And those eye's start to twinkle,
I undergo a change of pace;
So let's let the rain sprinkle.

Just realized i effed up the rhyme scheme.... shiitttt

Hello PurpleEurope,

Hehe, I actually like your title for this piece which was what drew me to it ^^; I think it's cute and it suits the poem itself. So we both know the rhyme scheme changes in the middle of it Regardless, your point comes across quite clearly. It's all very cute and sweet and makes me smile.

eye's - should be 'eyes' you want plural, not possessive/contraction

I undergo a change of pace;
So let's let the rain sprinkle.

You want a semicolon, or a period here. Your last line is a complete sentence; it can stand alone. This means a comma in this case would be too weak.

Great job ^^ And also you can always go back to edit it, just click on the "edit" button at the top right corner.

It's a sweet poem. I like it a lot. Nice job!

This was a nice and simple little poem. Very quick but there's nothing wrong with that.

THIS made my day (my night actually...)

Just realized i effed up the rhyme scheme.... shiitttt

Hahahaha, you know you should control your language. I personally have nothing against it but we have little ones wandering about. Just click 'edit' if you need anything changed or edited.

Well, this was a useless review so I won't be wasting your time any longer.

Keep writing!

- Mikko.

This was cute! Great rhyme although it was a bit short, but it was perfect anyway.