Lined Paper *gasp*

I told you I've had these pile up. These are just doodles, so maybe an in depth review isn't needed. Just some comments would be nice... and I know there's a lot of them, so if you just want to pick two or three to babble about, that's fine.

I apologize for the horrible lighting... had to use the camera for a reason I don't remember...


Random doodle page.


Girly


I didn't want to draw the wings, but the voices in my head insisted, so...


She looks weird...


Eww, he's puking stars. I think he was supposed to be singing nicely, but I dunno.


Umm... ignore the turtle and horse...


Thanks for your time.
-Suki

Hi Daisuki!

These are all pretty good. I think I like the first one and the third one the best, though.

I love the girl's cute expression and pose in #3, and the little dragon is nicely drawn. But, it would be even better if the dragon had some sort of pose or expression, instead of just hanging next to the girl with a bored/blank face, so we could see what exactly the girl is reacting to.

I think the hair and faces are best in #1; the expressions are also good. I wonder what the sitting up cat lady (sorry...what do I call her?) is telling to the other one. The only problem for me, is that I can't really tell what's going on beneath and around the sitting up cat lady. It almost looks like the cat lady is sitting on the girl. Anyways, it's just a bit confusing.

Hope I helped! Nice job-

Kae

So cute.

Since these aren't serious drawings, you are spared critiques, but I must say, your creatures especially are cute. Ignore the turtle? Why would I ever want to ignore such an adorable turtle doodle? To do so would be foolishness! Foolishness, I tell you!

You've got quite a unique style going here, and I would like to see more from you, especially more serious pieces.

As for why the girl with the headphones looks strange, a large part of it has to do with the fact that her eyes are too widely set. The eyes are set with roughly the width of one other eye in between. Any wider, and you get people looking like her. Any narrower, and you get cross-eyed characters. You've got almost two eye-widths between the eyes, so her face looks way wide and unnatural.

Hey there,

Your drawing is really awesome. All of them are really cute. Especially the second one..
Apart from drawing in pencil, try to do some painting work. I know you can do it well..
Keep doing you work. Well done..
All the best.. Cheers!!!

Hey! I'm so glad I came across this! ^_^ It's so weird, because I was just thinking lately about how I should do some kind of doodle compilation of my stuff xP

I had the urge to color a few of these ^_^ If only I had the time lol!

So I like the idea behind the first one. It looks like a mother talking to her daughter, and it's real sweet

The second one might be my favorite. I love how it's just so full of imagination, and how it fills up nearly the whole page. You must've been reeeeally bored lol! I love the hair and face of the main girl, very very pretty. The tiger really stood out to me too. The only critique I have is that the rest of the pic kind of blends into the background because it has no definition.

I really like the next pic! The girl has a great expression and I love the design of her clothes and the dragon! Two things: what is that thing on her head? Is it a hat? And are those wings or long hair coming off her back?

Great idea with the wings, I think it really made the picture. I like her whole design! Plus the hair is great too, I love where you placed the shine on her bangs. Critique: the wing section on the right is much bigger than the side on her left.

Not a bad picture at all, the only things I would fix would be giving her a nice smile! And maybe adjusting her eyes a bit to help with that expression.

lol, puking stars xP Probably my least fav pic. It feels like there's something not right about the profile. I don't think I could do better though, I suck at profile xP

Ignore the animals? But they're the best part!! So cute! Especially the horse! It actually looks really good to me I love the detail on her outfit. Did you actually doodle this? (I assume doodles are without reference) If so, this is quite good! Only complaint: her wide-eyed expression looks stoned.

Hope this helped! I was so happy to see some of your drawings!!

Hey there! I really like a lot of these! You have really good subject matter thats interesting to look at. Especially with the one with numerous subjects, there's so much to look at! There were a couple where the angle could have changed a bit for an angle that was more... flattering. I think the only one where I really saw this problem was with the character breathing moonlight? The neck and nose angles just made the pictures slightly skewed. Other than that, you have a lot of really neat drawings on here =] Especially for lined paper. haha, =] Well done.

I adore your art work, to say that they are just doodles I think that you have a talent for drawing. I'll appologize in acvance this maybe a long review (with the compition and all).... Sorry.

All art: Your art work has a sense of anime about it, the way you draw is more cartoony than realistic, not that it's a bad thing! I have a soft spot for anime. All of the pictures are absolutly adorable, especially the animals. If you've done these in school you must have very 'nice' teachers to be able to get away with it (most of my teachers are quite stric on that type of thing)

#1: I get the impression that the cat lady on top of the other is saying something along the lines of "You will learn patiance while I sit on you, until then shhh", I know that sounds saft before you say anything. I think that the pictture is a little confused, maybe if it had just been one or the other of the cat ladies it might of been better, but how do I know? The lines in the clothing are very good and the patterns don't look out of place, also is the shading and proportions are miles better than anything I could even hope to do.

#2: The animals in this one are my favourite above all else. If I had to choose which one, it would have to be the sleeping tiger. It's just so cute!!! Personally I don't quite understand the upside down person though... He, or she, seems a bit out of place if I'm perfectly honest. The two tailed fox girl is also very cute, I prefer her to the other more 'normal' person, I think this is because she fits in more with the animals. I like the little 'doodles' that you've included to fill the spare space, it justs adds a bit of personal flare.

#3: I think that the girl in this one is almost gypsy like, going by the dress/skirt she is wearing that is. I agree that the dragon should have more emotion in it's face rather than just hovering there. As with the first picture the clothing is very well drawn, although I believe this one could use more shadding. By the way can I have her boot? I simply love them. The only real critism I have is that her forearm is a tiny bit too short, but since it's a doodle it dosen't really matter at all.

#4: Without the wings on this one I don't think that it would be quite as effective, so I'm glad that voice inside your head insisted that you put them there. I like the ribbon you've drawn wrapping around her legs as well. The whole picture is rather angelic but somehow seems like a demonic angel, don't know how but it just does.

#5: Not much to say about this one that I haven't said about the others, other than that I agree that the eyes are a little too far apart. But this gives it a stylized look. So it dosen't matter too much.

#7: Turtle!!! Aww, so cute. The girl in this one is very cool, but her eyes make her look almost scarred or sad even.

Sorry I missed out #6, I didn't know what to put. Please, please, please keep drawing. Hope I helped at all. Again sorry for the length.

Oh I love your drawings girl!!
I can't believe that they're just doodles you did in class. (Something I often do too in my class when I'm bored lol)
They're just so amazing! There's expressions and emotions and shading. The best part is about the clothes. I like your style! I'm always out of ideas when it comes to clothes but you've done a pretty good job here. Did you design these yourself?? I'm so intrigued. You've got so many ideas. Every drawing is different from the first. You've created a different scene in every sketch. Like the wild person. There's a turtle, flowers and I see a tiny horse too =P. Best of all, the outfit of a wild man. You've got to give me some tips on how to make clothes because I never have any good ideas. I hope I kept it short like you asked. (Still seems long to me) Anyway, chow!