The Super Boy

I wrote this completely randomly, it's just a silly little dorky poem about any girl who sees her boyfriend as amazing! ♥ Clearly, he's not really a super hero Enjoy!



He can't fly,
But the way the wind flows through his hair,
Makes me high,
Like I'm floating,
I'm a love-lorn kite.

He is so strong,
He's got super strength and I feel safe,
In his arms where I belong,
He could break my heart and turn it to dust,
If it didn't feel so wrong.

He's not the bad guy,
And if any villain ex were to try upset me,
He wouldn't shy, from wiping a million tears
From my eyes,
Because he hates when I'm feeling torn up from the lies.

He's got no telepathic ability,
But he's got super senses that know whats up,
When I'm looking down,
He catches my words,
As they fall from my mouth.

He isn't a genious,
He can be a super dork,
But his cute boyish smile, is so mischievious,
Like a charm of some sort, with less innocence than a child,
He's so generous for giving me his time.

Call me a comic,
But he saved my heart when no-one else,
would bother with it, and I think that's heroic,
That makes him my hero,
And me his sidekick.

I have a boyfriend that I like so so so much, and this is just so perfect I can especially relate to the dork part; he's so dorky sometimes, but that's what makes him mine <3

I just overall love this. The only problem I had with it was some flow issues, but other than that, this is just great

Keep writing!

I really like this poem. Poems like this usually irk me, because they are overly sappy that I can't help to just role my eyes...(and no..I'm not a jaded girl who shuns anything to do with love hehe)

However, this was different. It was still cute, but I could tolerate it & I actually liked it.

Call me a comic,
But he saved my heart when no-one else,
would bother with it, and I think that's heroic,
That makes him my hero,
And me his sidekick

This was the cutest part!

Happy writing!