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Good Day Everyone!


Finally! I had posted my drawing... Pshhhh.... *sob*

Anyway, so I am working on my first writing project and I am now currently at the world building :)
I need your help to describe the way my characters below dress. You can invent what the clothes made of and etc. I want to hear your own view about their clothings and accessories.

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Last edited by iampaulop on Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:45 am, edited 11 times in total.
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I don't see it...
All I see is a tiny box with 'X image' written on it.
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Ah, this happens to all of us. The first time I attached an image the poxy thing died or summat. Or it flew away.

Firstly, an easy way to attach an image is by first uploading it on another image hosting site, like Photobucket, which is for the most part free. They will provide the IMG tag for you, and copy it to your clipboard when you click the box. Since the YWS forums use BBcode, just paste it where you want the image to go. I use Photobucket, and it's incredibly easy to use.

The Facebook link doesn't work for me either - your privacy settings are set so that only your friends can see the picture! Eek. And I do think a Photobucket image tag is safer.

Hope you see your art soon! I want to comment on it, and giving me a heads-up once you've managed to edit the post would be great! :D
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That seems to be happening a lot, to me in particular! If the upload link doesn't work, try attatching the image as a cover art for the topic. After that, I'd post the details of your problem into the 'report site bugs' topic in the lounge. hopefully then Nate can know how to fix it!
I wouldn't post a facebook link anyway, aside from the links often being broken you don't want everyone being able to find you :P




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Hi. I can finally see your drawings. You asked about the clothes.
For the girl: You can add beads on one lock of hair. (Probably on the right side) You can add long bead chians around her neck that reach her stomach. You can give her a few bangles, (make sure not to over do it). Make her wear simple slippers which look worn out. (This are just my ideas. It's totally up to you whether to use them or not)
For the boy: You can add an under shirt. Add a long scarf around his neck. The bangles look good in one hand. For the legs, give him the aladdin pants (The kind of pants that the cartoon aladdin wears. I'm sure you might have heard of him. I hope so. If not then you can look it up on google images.)
These are all the suggestions I can give you. The rest is up to you. I hope this helped even a little. :)
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Hmmn.
By the drawings I'm guessing you need people of, say, a tree-dwelling elf race?

Well. The female figure first.
Her hair is fine. But if she were a hunter or anything of the kind, she would find her skirt a nuisance. And try and add ethnic details, like beads and tattoos.

The male figure is better. Is he a hunter?

Again, invent uses for all their clothes. Until recently, we wore clothes mostly for their uses, and the same would apply very well with such an elf race. Leather would be a main component - you can make creative substitutes if they were, for example, vegetarian.

If you want I could draw a male/female pair for you. I need their background, and based on what I know and what I think would be right, I could attire them in an ensemble that resembles what you've given me here. :)

EDIT: I see you're using Photobucket! xD Easy to use, nyet?
Remember when the platform was sliding into the fire pit and I said, "Goodbye!" and you were like "NO WAY." and then I was all, "We pretended we were going to murder you."
That was great.



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