Pic 1: This one's pretty nice, but it lacked any real focus Pic 2: Ooh, graveyard! I felt like this could've been a *little* better, but it's still a pretty cool shot. Pic 3: This one I don't like. It just doesn't have anything to it. Pic 4: This is definitely my favorite. The colors are really cool, and whatever editing you did to get that effect worked well for this picture. Pic 5: This is okay, but it's simple and blurry. All-in-all it's just not anything especially unique.
I felt like there could've generally been a better choice in what you chose to photograph. I mean these were nice pictures, but they just didn't have a main focus for the most part (with the exception of pictures like the graveyard and ocean shots). These were nice angles and such, but it just lacked any real interest.
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I love the colours in the first picture, and just the plant in general. The second picture has got to be my favourite. It's haunting. The third is pretty, nice colours, not a whole lot to it. The next two pictures didn't strike anything in me. I looked at them and thought "meh". Your first three were lovely, your last two weren't quite up to par.
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1. I like the angle that this shot is taken at and how the line where the grass meets the dirt kind of leads the eye through the picture. The problem I have with this picture is just the over-exposed sky. While sometimes I think this can be a creative touch, here I just think that it distracts the eye a bit too much. But other than that it's a nice picture.
2. This is my favourite of the bunch. Me and my Dad used to go photographing in graveyards... lol But I like the angle, I like the black and white and I like how you can see the row upon row of graves. There is just something interesting about this photo.
3. Whilst the colours are very rich in this shot, which is nice, I just find that it's very dull. There is no focus to it, there is no one thing that the viewer is supopsed to be looking at. It's just a mish mash of trees and there are no lines or things directing the eye in a certain way.
4. I probably would've preferred this shot without the shoes if I'm honest. You have nice lines and colour and light and the shoes just seem kind of plonked into the middle of that. Plus I think they are kind of out of focus. So whilst I get what you were trying to do, I don't think you managed to pull it off.
5. This would've been a very nice photo...had the flower been in focus. It's completely out of focus, which means your prime object of the photo is out of focus. It's very difficult to get small things like flowers in focus when you are up close because the point of focus jumps around a lot but just be patient and move around till you get it.
Hope that helped! Keep on taking photos!
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Bex x
'The creation of a single world comes from a huge number of fragments and chaos.' - Hayao Miyazaki
Okay! The first picture... It looks amazing. The rainbow colors on the leaves make them look almost magical. And I like the sunlight shimmering through the trees from above. It's awesome! It makes me want to go there right away. The shaded grass and the pebbles (If that's what they are) look beautiful. The second picture... Oooh, spooky. The greyscale suits it. It looks like a scene from one of those black and white films of old times. (Although I've never actually seen one). It could also suit a good horror movie. Everything looks so peaceful and quiet; a little too quiet... hehe lolz The third picture... It's very bright and colorful. I like that part about it. The light green leaves in front of the dark green ones look pretty awesome to me. (Mostly because the color combination is excellent!). The picture looks alive, if you know what I mean. I feel like I can jump in there. I'm amazed you didn't edit this one at all. It's so green and of course I like this one the most. The fourth picture... Aww. The scenery is so beautiful. Are those your shoes by the way? The last picture is a little blurry but I like it too. You're a great photographer. Keep it up! (I hope I haven't said too much)
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