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I've been feeling a little down lately. My teacher gave me a bad grade although it was just a small mistake in my maths test. I hadn't been feeling well that day. I got mad and drew these in class while she was teaching :)


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Do comment on it :)
I'll post some manga/anime drawings of mine soon when I get the time to draw them.
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I thought these were pretty neat. The proportions on the first one is a bit off, the skull is a bit to long and not as round, but thats not bad =] The second one is awesome. You have really good shading and the proportions seem really neat. For a classroom doodle, this is really cool. Nice work =]
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Wow, I'm impressed. For me, the word 'doodle' brings to mind stick figures and cutesy bubbles. But these are quite good (and a bit disturbing). As tydecker said, the skull is off on the proportions; however, it's quite good for a doodle on notebook paper. The background is great.

I love the second one. No clue what it is, but A) I would not like to meet it in a dark alley and B) it has excellent shading and definition.

Well done, good luck in class, and keep up the doodling.
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Your doodles are fantastic. Yeah, they might not be too accurate but at least you've managed to draw those two evil, dark creatures well in a classroom and you can get busted in any minute. :D
I won't be criticizing much about them since they're doodles, but I love the shading and the second one is definitely my favourite! I loved the eyes and the teeth in particular.
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Hey! :D

The doodles are fantastic! xD
I can't believe you drew this during maths class and that too so well! ^^

And really when I saw this, believe me,
My sister just screamed seeing a cockroach in the washroom so it really spooked me off!
Loool!!!!! xDD

You draw pretty well!
You must keep drawing!
Is there anything else I can review on you're drawings? :)

WALL POST ME! <3

Giving this a 10/10

Loved it!

Cheers and Love,
Cookie or LM

P.S: The Shamrockers are winning! I hope they slow down a BIT :'( (if you're in Shamrockers, sorry :S)
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Dear Twinkle,

That's weird . . . there is a girl named 'Twinkle' in my class too! She is usually good in Math and she feels really angry and sad whenever she looses marks. She has been loosing some, recently. I guess some people are so alike!

Woh! You should keep doodling like that whenever you are angry or sad. They are awesome! But, 'Pit of Hell'? That sounds a bit weird . . .

1: The first one is awesome. I mean, is that a snake coming out of that thing's head? Cool! It looks oddly like an apple with a worm coming out . . . this is the 'dark version'.

I could never draw like that . . . the shading was excellent and everything else about it, too. Keep up the good work!

2: The second picture was cool too. I don't now how this came into my mind, but that picture made me remember a bit of Greek Mythology:

Hades, the God of death and the Underworld, has three people who go into the world above for him. They are called 'The Three Furies'. They have bat wings and they are definitely these malformed creatures from the Underworld. You picture looks exactly like my picture of them (in my head). The name: 'Pit Of Hell' suits the Underworld part.

AWESOME . . . I WANNA DRAW LIKE YOU SOME DAY!

Your drawing style reminds me of Brett Helquist, an illustrator who illustrates a book series called: 'A Series of Unfortunate Events' by Lemony Snicket. Those books are really cool.

I hope you feel better. Next time you have a Math test, I believe that you will score good marks. Study well!

Regards,
Nova

P.S. I hope this has made you feel better.
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"Oh, you can't help that, we are all mad here."

- Extract from Alice In Wonderland.

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Sweeet!! :D I love them! Quite amazing for doodles, as it's been pointed out ^_^ I usually don't go much for words next to the pictures, but The Pit Of Hell was awesome :) Since you were at school when you drew these, it kinda made me grin. The extra angst just made me smile xP

My fav is the second one, it just POPS RIGHT OUT AT YOU O_O. I've never seen anything like it before, and I love it. Its wings remind me of razor sharp teeth. And just the way its head is shaped in that strange, cool, nightmarish way. And after I've gotten over the fear of it, I notice the hand reaching up out of the ground below it, holding a heart! Wow! :D

I like the first one a lot, too! The head probably isn't proportioned right, but seriously, skulls are one of those things that are usually drawn stylistically anyways, so I think you're good x) I really like the shading you did on the snake, I can pretty much see the scales on it. Also, the webs were a nice touch!

I even like the crinkles in the paper, and how it's not a perfectly clean white sheet. It has kind of a brownish, tattered feel?

Anyways, no real critiques here, I just loved it xD
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Those are pretty cool :) you have quite the talent there



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