OMG Kitty15!

WOOOOOW! Very very stunning work! Your sister is lucky to have you as a sister! My only complaint for this picture is the dullness in the lines. Which could just be the computer being a little off I hope you add colour! It is beautiful!

WOW! WOW! WOW! That's one of the most BEAUTIFUL pieces of artwork i've ever seen! Your sisters lucky to have someone like you

Hey sarah! Your drawing is a beauty! Your sister must be so proud of you
Here are some points I'd like to comment on:
> Since you don't like add any colors to your drawing, I suggest outlining your drawing using a black pencil or a black ball point pen. You can also add shadow effect to your drawing to give it that 3D look.
> I just feel that something is wrong with the face but can't really figure out what it is. Probably the neck you drew is not short to the extend that it makes the face touching the shoulders. Also, you should add more effort to the eyes and the chin. Also don't make that line drawn next to nose from the right too clear, it would make the face look older and wrinkled.

Your drawing is simply awesome, keep it up!

Why hello there little sister! I thought I'd add my review to these other fine people's.

I really like how you've done my hair, you've made my quick up-do look quite cute! Though I think I have a few more frayed ands than that, not that I'm complaining The nose is a little out of proportion, it's almost as wide as my lips and eyes. Which, yes it may just manage to be as wide as my lips when I'm not smiling but I have pretty big eyes ^^

A good level of detail though, the book looks good and even if I am a bit wide, the folds of the clothing have been nicely done so I can forgive you for that!

The glasses are a little rough compared to the rest so you might want to re-sketch them slightly.

Annnd that's it. I'm done being critical now

Heather xxx

Dude! That's one awesome pencil work! Well done!

Comments.
- What Star said : Also don't make that line drawn next to nose from the right too clear, it would make the face look older and wrinkled.
- The laptop seems oddly placed, perspectively speaking.
- The features on the laptop could be a little straighter - it is a laptop.
- love the book and the folds!
- Give her a teeny smidge of a smile!

Great work, anyways!
~Lava