This is such honest poetry which really makes it all the more special. You have a great way with words and I encourage you to keep writing like this and you will write many more amazing pieces! I dont really have anything bad to say about it so great work I loved it!
I loved this poem so much! I was having a really terrible time and was crying and everything, and decided I need to do something. The first poem I saw was your and let me tell you I feel so much better now! Thank you so much for your poem! It has really helped me!!!
Secondly, I love the repeated verse, and the flow of the poem all together. I'm not one for any spelling mistakes so I can't help you there.
Matthew wrote:Take your time and pray Thank God for your days Last time we talked you said you were hurting And I felt your pain in my heart
I want to tell you keep on praying Keep on living and believing Love will find its way into your heart
That was my favourite verse. It was really deep and touching. In fact, the whole poem was. I loved it so much! Keep on writing!
Trust in God and all else follows.
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Beautiful! A great approach of love. I love how the result is it doesn't solve everything, yet makes a huge difference. Makes the reader feel like their is hope, and realistically find power within themselves as well! Love the imagery with the arms and palms. Truely magical!
I love the first half of the title love covers! Not so hot about the second half. But incredible stuff non the less! Never stop writing!