In 1524 There was a sister and a brother andd they had a mom and a dad. And somthing horrible happend. I am here to track down evidence and tell you the story. It was a stormy night and Lucy and John had just gone to bed. When Lucy had suddenly heard a noise. She got up and went to John. "John wake up, John". "What." I..III heard something." Another noise like a blood curtling scream. "What was that". "I don't know. It sounded close thow." "I'm scared." "Lucy We must be strong. Now I'm going out to see what it was." "Wait for me." They were out the door and headed for the woods then. "John I saw somthing. Somthing yellow and glowing." "It was probaly your imagination." "Probaly?" "Yeah." "Somthings got me John. Help HELP!" "Lucy?" Nothing. "AHHHH......"
Now 1965.
"Mom?" "Yes sweety?" "Can we go to the mall? I heard they are opening a new store." "sure honey." "Yeah." This was a girl names Layla and her mom. But soon it will mostly be Layla, Lucy, and John. "Mom can I have $20?" "Sure, I needed to give youyour allowance anyway.""19, 20. Thanks mom." So Layla walked down to the mall and the new store. "The Pigeons past. Nice. Oooo nice book." "That will be 20 bucks." Said a lady. "Now cough up the money." "Here you go." "No here you go. Now take it it's horrible." "OK." So Layla took the book and went home. "Mom look at this cool book. I got it at The Pigeons Past." "Nice." "I'll be upstairs." "OK I don't feel so well." "Are you OK?" "I'm FINE!" "OK OK OK." So she went upstairs and opened the book and- BANG! "Mom!" No answer. She went downstairs and no one was there. "Yes. I'm home alone. I'm home alone." But she got bored of doing that so, she went back to her book. So she opened the book and two figures came out of it. She peered at them and she finnaly understood. They were two kids. "W-W-Who are you?" "I'm.... Lucy and this is... John." "I'm Layla." "Nice name. Layla. John isn't that a darling name?" "Yes I ♥ it."
THE END! (Cliffhanger!)
I know it's dorky, but I thought I'd show you guys my wonderful writing skills when I was seven. I had yet to find out what a comma was, it seems, and how to format an actual story, but whatever. And the plot is spectacular, I know. I'm only slightly impressed by my spelling (I typed it up exactly how it was written, even puncuation, quotation, dialogue, paragraphs, spelling, and size of letters =]). And I actually used the word "peered" which I haven't even used in my most recent works. lol, so... hope you got a kick out of it. I think people usually get a kick out of their own writing compared to others getting a kick out of it, but whatever.
*smiles at your seven year old self*. I'm not going to give it a proper review though (which you probably don't want anyway 
) heh. I think I have something simillar about a pair of eyes and evil police... O.o 
