A Potterhead's Patience

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This is just for fun.


Welcome mail,
When will you ever arrive?
Because you're driving,
A million of potterheads crazy.

Errol or Hedwig,
I just don't care,
Send my mail now,
And I will shut my mouth up.

I'm waiting with calm and relax,
If refreshing your email account,
For every 15 seconds,
Is normal to you.

Now thousands of people,
Are receiving the mail,
When will it be my turn?

Please hurry up,
Before I'll end up gnawing,
Someone's arm off,
So that I can use it to hit people in the face.

This is how a potterhead,
Would actually enter,
A mental hospital,
All because of a single email.
Last edited by kikialicia31 on Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:42 am, edited 2 times in total.
"The nicest part is being able to write down all my thoughts and feelings, otherwise I‘d absolutely suffocate."- Anne Frank




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Hey Kiki,

Ah, a nice not intense poem. Thank you. You made me smile when I like in a very bad mood! I also understand waiting for mail. Hah. I had one little question about one part.

Because you're driving,
A million of potterhead crazy.

Shouldn't it be potterheads? I'm not sure what a potterhead is, but my computer is sure with changing it to pottered.


Please hurry up,
Before I'll end up gnawing,
Someone's arm off,
So that I can use it to hit people in the face.

This entire stanza made me laugh. Again Thanks!

Thats all!

PM me or post on my wall if you have any questions!

-Boo


SERIOUSLY. I love you for this poem. Maybe thats a little far... I extremely like this poem? ;p Oh well you get the point!
Milestiba uzvar visu, Milestiba ir upuris.




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Haha, this is funny!
I'm so swapping myself over to the catagorie of "potterheads"
I don't find anything in particular that I feel you should change. I mean I could say it's got too little imagery and it wasn't very emotional or whatever... but this wasn't that kind of poem and for what it was it was wonderful and hilarious!

I'll give 3½/5 icky sticky spiders!

Good Luck & Keep Writing

// Demoness
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost



[as a roleplayer is feeling sad about torturing her characters] GrandWild: "You're a writer, dear. Embrace it."
— GrandWild