I Will Survive

Even Though
Your Small
You Got
Some Thing Big
Inside Of Me
A Small Person
May Have
Have A Big Voice
People Say
You Have Noting
Else In Inside
But I Will Survive
Talk Stuff Behind
My Back
I'Don't Care
I Will Survive
I Can't
Give Up
Can't
Give In
I Will Survive
Iil Try
To Bottle
Up My Feelings
But I let Them Out
Love Games
People Have a fake Smile
Fake Love
What Else To Do
Give Up
No
I Will Survive
sing it out loud
be proud
Take A bow
I Survived
You Can To

I really love this!! Great imagery!!!!

Hi there!

This is a very good peom. I like the way you break up each line. It's very original and I've never seen a poem written like that. Your spelling and grammer is good except for two things that I listed below.

Your Small

It should be you're.

Some Thing Big

Shouldn't this be 'something'? Maybe I'm just messing up your structure.

Again, great job. This has a good message and I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!

Cool poem. I like the message a lot

Last line:
"You can too"

A Small Person
May Have
Have A Big Voice
People Say
You Have Noting
Else In Inside

Delete one of the have's, and fix Nothing.
I also think punctuation would help the work. Like
"Give Up?
No!"

Keep writing,

I love this poem it was great.I can't believe you wrote this. I am so proud I just love it. There was some spelling mistakes like

IDont

and

Iil

But It was all great in the end. Keep up the good work I really love your writing you are getting better each time you write something just keep it up.

Hey Youwish,

First off one error:

Iil I'llTry
To Bottle

Your poem has a lack of punctuation, which is very important!

Like her for example :

You Got You have
Some Thing Big period
Inside Of Me

See it sounds like YOU have something inside ME. You have to use punctuation!

Inside Of Me I dont understand why you have this here. Inside of me. Unless you say 'Inside of me is a small person, but I have a big voice.
A Small Person
May Have
Have A Big Voice

I won't go through it all, I think you get the point punctuation is extremely important. In anything. I do like what you are trying to say in the poem, and you got your point through. Good Job!

PM me or post on my wall!

-Boo

Wow this was good. I am a small person myself and this helps lift me out of my random depression. Though I noticed a few mistakes the poem was very good and inspiring. Keep it up!