Rogues and Pets vs. Dolls DT

I will be able to post in about ten minutes so would you mind if I had Rayden come over to he training and watch? you can have whoever invite him to join.... or do you want him to say something sassy to Davie who challenges him?

Well, Dvie is about to be eaten by Poca, so the humorous part of Sheara and Davies training is about to begin... perhaps later? I thought this would be a good segway into finding the river. You see... well... Davie doesnt taste too good.. and Sheara doesnt want Poca to throw up when she's two stories tall... so... Davie goes for a swim... (Gross, I know. But It will be hilarious, I swear!) And there is a little something I have planned with Vuzzy where Seena gets injured, but feel free to make fun of Davy in Poca's mouth, and freak out when Seena gets hurt! Jus please, nobody get Davnick out of her mouth. )

*Dies laughing!*

Alright Razzle how about I just have Rayden and Reva have more adorable awkwardness until your ready??

Just give me a shout when you want to have Rayden come on in. (I'm thinking I will have tige freak out when Seena gets hurt, I have been neglecting him awfully)

This may be really obnoxious of me but I am feeling like the shlump of the group because I don't want to interfere with battles and such going on right now since I love reading the story. I just wanted people to know i am still here, any suggestions on how Lydia should make her reappearance?

Otay. You see, in a last ditch effort to get out of Pocas mouth, Davie charges her with as mutch electricity as he can. But, she is after all a partial electricity pet, and so all it does is make her fur go all poofy! She holds the charge, so when Seena runs up to try and get Daivie out, a HUGE static charge jumps to her, shooting here against a tree and stopping her heart. Poca spits out Davie, who is REALLY nasty at this point. I assume Rayden and Tige freak out, but Davie does also. They all run over, but shes "dead." They begin to freak out and cry.. ect. Then Sheara appears, claiming she know CPQ or something like that. She uses static jolt (from her feet...) And re-starts Seenas heart. Thus, happy ending!

OH my GOSH!!!!!!

*dies from all this amazingness!*

if you don't mind I think I'll leave Rayden out of this situation. he would end up killing someone in his hysterical rampage.
(besides writing for both Tige and Rayden would be hard as the two if them would probably trip over one another.) XD

So if it's alright, I'll just use Tige and have HIM go on a rampage and threaten to kill someone. (Davnick or Poca... or both?)

Hey guys! These ideas are awesome, but could you not post on the actual storybook for like, twenty minutes? I need to catch up, so....
If you guys want to post, that's fine, just slow down a bit!
Thanks! Thanks so much!

Oh. Oh sorry! I didn't see that till after I posted! Sorry Icee

Okay, Razzle, I was going to let you post some more first before Seena is "dead" and Sheara's CPQ idea, if that is okay. I just don't want to forget to put in anything!

Also, Tabithalillian,
you are free to have Lidya come and watch the funny scene take place. Aslo, if still want her to get closer to Sheara, you can have her give Sheara some comfort after Seena is alive again. She will be *VERY* upset from everything that is going on. (Hurting Davy, Poca almost eating Davy, Seena dying, electrifying her to save her life, ect, ect.)

I have just done an ungodly amount of reading up on respiratory problems that involve bloody coughing.....
(I know I'm deranged but I like to make sure all my writing is somewhat fact based, even my fantasy.)

So I think I'm going to go with TB as what's wrong with Rayden.
(I am so cruel to him, lord I'm an awful person.) I am also going to go with some things that Vuzzy, Razzle and Bee suggested. So I will try my best to describe what he has, without being too graphic, or giving away plot bunnies that are frisking about in my head.

Rayden has this worlds version of TB (Tuberculosis.) which is a often times fatal infectious respiratory (most of the time) disease. I would like to go with the antiquated name of the disease for my version, which is Consumption. (so named because the infected seem to waste away from the inside out.) it is usually identified by the coughing of blood by those infected and other signals of respiratory distress. It also comes in waves, the infected person will seem fine for a while, then have a flare up- when all the symptoms of the Consumption are present.

Rayden because of his unique physiological make up (due to his phoenix traits) has a very strong resistance to the disease and is not contagious as others suffering from it are. SO even if he coughs on someone, or gets blood on them, they will not become infected.
The disease for him manifests much like one would expect. He has flare ups every so often, which can last several days to several weeks (his longest flare was three and a half weeks long). These flares are accompanied by: high fever (very high in his case), chills, lots of bloody coughing, trouble breathing, loss of appetite, pallor, and fatigue.

While not in a flare up he still had respiratory problems much like asthma: When he is exposed to extreme temperature changes and when he is in bad air (like dust, smoke, or smaug) these can cause him to go into a fit of coughing that may (or may not) include bloody coughing and trouble taking full breaths.

The details of how long he has been infected and how he got infected I will keep hidden until the proper time!

if anyone has any questions feel free to ask! (Vuzzy, as creator of this SB you have full rights to tell me if you want me to change anything, or to ask clarifying detail giving questions)

Sorry this is so long, but I thought I should just get it down. Now everyone knows what and why Rayden is hacking up a lung all the time.

~Shadow

I like it Shadow! And yes, we are horrible to our characters. *evil laugh* I was thinking about it, and Seena wouldn't know that RayRay has this Consumption, right? I think they should have a moment where she finds out and starts to freak out about why he didn't tell her, and if he'll be okay, etc. Maybe they could have it a little later in Storybook-land today. What do you think?

I'm glad you like it!

I was thinking maybe after the battle sometime she finds out. maybe he has a flare (he isn't having one now) and then she drags the information out of Dante. many of the others know he was coughing blood but he asked Everlee not to tell Seena.

what do you think?

Oh, that would be really good. She would be so mad at him (in that loving way) for not telling her. [Insert Evil Laugh Here] Everlee's gonna get an earful.

Yea, we are evil to our characters Shadow, but at least you aren't making yours swim in puke...

no, I'm just having him die a slow, painful and wasting death...