Through the cracks

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Haven't posted in a while. I've been too busy. I took this picture a really long time ago. Found it. And edited it. I have no idea what camera I used, and I used picnik for edits. I brightened it a bit, and put a nineteen sixties setting on it. Thats it. I'm trying to cut back on the editing. Its probably not working =] But this is it. Once again, its blurry. I NEED A NEW CAMERA.
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Although it seemed blurry like you said, but the picture is so beautiful. In fact, I thought that picture would be a great if it was a card or an invitation. I love love love the editing,the shadow behind the flower and the brightness you have used made the petals look awesome!
Well done! :smt041
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Although it seemed blurry like you said, but the picture is so beautiful. In fact, I thought that picture would be a great if it was a card or an invitation. I love love love the editing,the shadow behind the flower and the brightness you have used made the petals look awesome!
Well done! :smt041
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Wow, this is really beautiful! The flower really does look amazing! And even though it is a bit blurry, I think it was the perfect touch to it! Makes it more dramatic and artistic... if you know what I mean. XD The blurs of pink on the petals are absolutely gorgeous too! Is that the nineteen-sixties setting on it? Wow, it's really working. Hahaha, not really much of a review... but I adore this picture, and I love the poem on the side too. This is great! Send it in to Hallmark, and I'll buy it! =D
Reading is the sole means by which we slip,
involuntarily,
often helplessly,
into another's skin,
another's voice,
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Hey there Ty! Another great work from you.

I love the lighting and the color that you've placed on this one, the angle is nice and the shadowing it has, you've got the good options for this. The only problem is the rule of thirds and the blur. I understand that the camera can't take up that really short length, try to do manual focus and place it in the right length for a sharp capture, if this doesn't work, move the camera farther so it can capture a sharp shot and then crop the photo.

Overall, this is great. I like the quote that you've placed, although some good positioning for this will earn you some bonus. I hope this helps!
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Hey Ty!

Yeah, this is a bit blurry bit that's the only critique I have xD It looks amazing, whatever editing you did worked! Even thought the image could be sharper, the blurriness made the bottom petals look like flames. And I love what you wrote at the top. Did you write that yourself or did you quote it? Cuz I think that's amazing.

Keep it up xP
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