Art I've Done This Summer Break-2011

So summer break is going to be over tomarrow and I have no new art to post besides some doodles and works in progress. Below is all the art I've done this break starting with the newest and going down to the oldest. I've noticed a little improvement in my style and compostition.
I'm hoping some of the older members of YWS can see this post so they can note any improvements they see from my previous post a while ago.

1 "I Am Who I've Always Been"

This is my most recent drawing finshed just yesterday. All done in black, blue, and orange ballpoint pen on paper. 11x8.5


2 "Sent Off"
Done on a rather small peice of cardboard.



3 "The Fish"
11x8.5 ballpoint pen and white gell pen



4 "The Gatekeeper's Daughter"
11x8.5
This my second favourite of all my drawings. All ballpoint pen.



5 "Bent In Between Sides"
Done on another small piece of cardboard. Oil paint



6 "The Gloomy Ghoul"
11x8.5
Ballpoint pen, sharpie pen, and a bit of prismacolor



7 "Unraveled"
11x14
Oil on canvas.
I'm personally not to big a fan of this one but I figured it deserves to be up here with my other art.



8 "From This Perspective"
11x8.5
Ballpoint pen.



9 "The Gatekeeper's Void"
11x11
Pencil



10 "Gallery of Nightmares Pt. 2"
11x8.5
Ballpoint pen
I did this one right before summer break but I figured some people would want to see it anyway.



Extra: 11 "Unforseen Consequences"
14X11
Ballpoint pen, Charcoal, Pencil.
I did this drawing two last summer break more than a year ago and thought I'd repost it for those of you who haven't seen it. A lot of people on here became farmiliar with my art through this drawing.

Sorry some of the images got a little cut. Go here if you want to see the uncut ones http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mike-Fren ... 8017340529 And drop a like on my page if you want

This is some pretty nice and creepy stuff here.

You're really detailed. I love the dark feel that your art gives off. My favorite of these is "The Fish", the complementary colors look lovely. It looks as if the branches are tormenting the fish and that they're going to bring it down but then i thought that maybe the fish is a ghost.

I think you art could be more interesting if you splash some different colors in. I think like a dark purple or a deep red could blend with the dark feeling.

Can I just say I'm jealous? You make everything so life-like. Great contrast and shading. *runs away and hides from awesomeness*

Even though I don't know anything about Art (apart from photography), I can say that I like the colours and the detail you put into it. They're really good

Sorry if I'm not much of a help They're nice pictures..
Mac

Wow, you're drawings are so...creepy. In a good way though, don't worry! I LOVE the detail in your work, and I honestly have no critic for this (sorry!). Everything shows immense imagination, and they all seem to tell a story. Maybe you could illustrate some books here! Anyway, keep it up! I want to see more!