Vines and My Puppy again (And More)

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Hey everyone! Here are more photos for you guys to critique. I good constructive criticism would be gladly appreciated from you guys.
#FF0000 ">NOTE: #FF0000 ">Don't forget to right click on the image and view image to view the whole photo.
I took this while my puppy was sleeping, she likes moving around and cuddling with her other sisters. I like bringing her inside the house and cuddling with her in the couch though. x]
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This are the hang vines that attached themselves to our palm tree, it had some red fruits growing from it. I wouldn't want to taste it though. xD
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This is from a mountain lake, it was raining during the day I took this, so once we got to a high altitude, it was really foggy and my ear drums seemed to pop already. When we got there, we found a great lake shrouded with fog as trees seem to lean towards it, the echo of birds chirping from behind the fog while the cold breeze led the bamboo trees to sway from side to side.
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Once we came down from the mountain, there were workers on the road, they were working on the sulfur mines. The smoke that's coming out from the mines are steam, the geothermal power is used to power most towns and cities within its vicinity. I didn't want to go near because it had a very awful stench and it made my eyes red and watery.
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So there you go! I don't mind if the criticism is either negative or positive, both would influence me better, thank you for viewing my work and have a nice day. :pirate2:
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All your pictures are gorgeous! Your puppy is so cute! You should know by now that all your Pictures are always amazing. I can't even choose a favorite.
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These pictures are so Awesome! O: I love the diting that you did, and the puppy. I can just droll all over that. It's so super cute. I love how your pictures have a awesome focal point, and the one with the lake is just the best. Your editing skillz make the picture come to life even more, and assing a certain type of mood within each picture. great work, keep on snapping those pictures, and upload some more? o: That'll be epic.

Only one one picture I have concerns for. The one with the vines that is. If there's fruit growing on those vines, then why don't you make them show up within the picture? That one is too dark and it's hard to see the actual "form" of the vines. I would like to see the structure and what the fruit looks like, and possibly have something in the background, that would make it so much better.

Thanks for posting! ^^




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Oh my gosh, these picture are so amazing! I absolutly love the last two. The third one is my favorite. I'm a country girl so I like seeing pictures of trees or open fields and such.

The first photo is so cute! I like that you made it black and white. That definitly adds to the relaxing feel of it. The second photo is the only one I have a critique about. When I looked at it, it was hard for me to tell what it really was. I knew they were vines, but the picture is so dark that it was hard for me to tell what they really were. Maybe you could've brightened it a bit?

Like I said earlier, the third photo is my favorite! It's gorgeous. The fourth photo is also very cool. I like how you captured the steam (or whatever that is) as it came up the mountain. It really adds to the whole scene.

These are great pictures! I love them! :)
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I wasn't really feeling the first two, but I liked the third one, and I really liked the last one. Cheers
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I'm dying to know what program you use for edits o.o. You are a photography GOD.
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Heey nicolas! *huggles*
Me again. This is going to be a short review XD I really like the first one and the two last ones..I didn't really feel the second one. I suggest you remove the word in it, because I think it would look a lot better that way.
But I absolutely love the other ones :)
Great work!
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Actually I am not a photographer, but I would love to see some good photography always. You are an awesome photographer, that any one can tell you easily by seeing these sample pictures. You have good creativity, timing sense, and everything that a photographer needs.

In the first photo I really liked the black and white effect. Also it gave me a pleasant feel.
Second photo is a bit dark but still I like it. But comparing to other photos its not up to the mark.
Third one was absolutely fantastic. And FYI, its my wallpaper in my mobile ;)
hmmm what to say about the fourth one. absolutely no words.

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I'm dying to know what program you use for edits o.o. You are a photography GOD.


Well, I use Picnik. Why not Photoshop or any other photo-editting programs? They seem to be too complicated for me, it needs a higher sense of logic, something that I don't have. xD

Don't worry if you find Picnik too simple though, I found it an advantage for me because you can use it online and being simple seems to be straight-forward for me, which is nice. Try to feel the photo, give meaning and attach your emotion to it, as if that photo was someone you loved, then once you decide how the picture should be, go on and edit it. :)

Emotions differ on each subject in a photo, like the puppy on one of my photos, it's sleeping and looks comfortably cozy in its position. So I wanted the photo's color to feel soft and the focus on the puppy since there are lots of things that might distract the viewing. You should manipulate the photo how you like it to be, I manipulated the color and made it the way it is so that the viewer might be able to find a connection within him or her with the photo. I hope this helps for you. :D
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Heya Vitamin!! These are amazing, as usual. Your editing really enhanced them and draws the attention. Great job!

I absolutely love the first one. It is soooo sweet! Beautiful tones and lighting. I love how soft it is, yet there is still texture in there too. I have no critique for this photo. :D

I don't particularly like the second, especially next to these other amazing photos. It just doesn't match the quality of the rest. The subject itself has potential, but the way you did it isn't really interesting, at least to me. Here you basically have just a stringy, lumpy silhouette with no focus, and you can't really tell what it is. I do like your idea of putting it on a while background, and the angle you chose, but it would be so much better if you include some detail in there too.

The third is definitely my favorite. I love everything about it. The tones, colors, softness but not too soft, fogginess, the way you can't see anything beyond this little bit of greenery.

The last is really cool too. It would probably make you wonder whats going on, if you hadn't explained it. I love the texture and details, and the fogginess.

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These are all just beautiful! I don’t think you should have put the writing on the second one, its good but I just think it would be better without it, and I not really feeling the last one for some reason.(Just my opinion) :)
It’s not fair how good you are. AMAZING!

Oh and by the way the right click thing to see the whole picture doesn’t work for me :( it might just be my laptop though.

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Ahhh! *clickclickclickclick* Why can I only like this once?! This is awesome! I don't really spend much time looking at photography, but you're really good - my brother has a talent in landscape photography, but this is just spectacular! I had to comment!
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awwww It's sleeping.
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